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A Stranger in My Old Backyard, by Stephen Goodlad

17/6/2022

 
We parked at the bottom of the cul-de-sac and looked at our childhood home.

“You were born in that room.” I said pointing to a curtained bedroom.

Anne was humouring my reminiscences, my insistence on visiting, not her choice.

Everything was different now, a new door, the saplings were trees, a conservatory added.

I recalled each child’s name for each house that we’d played street games with. Anne smiled, then asked to go.

After she died, I returned to the same spot, but I felt like a stranger in my old backyard. I drove off and I have never returned.

Pamela Kennedy
17/6/2022 05:57:54 pm

Sometimes we truly have to say goodbye to our past.

Sue Clayton
18/6/2022 06:05:22 am

I visited the overseas flat, overseas, where I first drew breath for the one and only time in seventy years. Still a stranger to the place I visit every day. A photo hangs on my bedroom wall.

Fliss Zakaszewska
18/6/2022 09:55:17 am

Sad, evocative and poignant. I've been back once to the house where I grew up. It was a weird feeling, not being able to run up the path and up the stone steps and into the 'bungalow on stilts. And I wanted to climb my favourite tree (taller than I remembered... 😁) and... I couldn't...

Nicely told.

Malvina Perova
20/6/2022 09:13:12 am

People we love carry our locked up memories and keep safe the emotions long gone. A beautiful story to remind me of that. Thank you :)

JM Subban
23/6/2022 12:59:34 pm

Sad. Whenever I dream of home, it's always of the house in which I was raised.

Stephen Goodlad
24/6/2022 05:34:36 pm

Some lovely meaningful comments back. Thank you for reading my story and mentioning the personal memories it provokes for you.


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