The once calm starless sky exploded into flashes of bright colors preceded by ringing explosions. The chaos went on and one as more explosions shook the ground. The sky seemed to be tearing itself apart and breaking into a thousand pieces. The barrage of sounds and lights built in intensity until it crescendo into a hail storm of color and sparks turning the night into day. Small black burning hot shrapnel's of metal rained down onto the soft green fields making people scatter. A single childish male voice shouted out above the din in glee, “Daddy, I just love fireworks!”
Sandra James
17/9/2021 10:48:02 am
Lovely, Madison! Nice surprise ending :)
Fliss Zakaszewska
17/9/2021 01:11:37 pm
Nice twist.
Pamela Kennedy
17/9/2021 02:03:12 pm
Loved the surprise ending.
Jennifer Duncan
17/9/2021 06:31:16 pm
Very descriptive. What might be scary usually fills children, and adults, with delight.
Pa Pa
17/9/2021 09:44:54 pm
Very descriptive and surprising! Excellent writing.
Sue Clayton
18/9/2021 05:25:03 am
These types of fireworks are seen all too often in too many countries these days. Comments are closed.
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