The separation began with religion, politics, conflicting desires—the usual things that tear families apart. Jack was a teenager when the threads began to unravel like a pair of worn jeans. And it culminated a half-century later with his mother’s funeral. Jack didn’t go. He was living another life in another place in another time. Besides, she was dead. He didn’t think she’d mind. Of course, others did, not just family. Friends, co-workers, strangers felt that he had broken an unwritten, unforgiveable "thou shalt." Still, Jack had no regrets. The death in his family had happened long before his mother’s.
Pamela Kennedy
11/6/2021 01:42:10 pm
Perhaps he knew he would be unwelcomed and unwanted...just expected to perform a courtesy...thou shalt not judge him unkindly.....
Sivan Pillai
11/6/2021 02:06:50 pm
Yes, she's dead and gone. Live your life as you like. Beautifully written, Jim.
Swapan k Banerjee
11/6/2021 07:22:21 pm
The last line absolves Jack of any feeling of guilt or regret. It's masterclass, Jim!
Jennifer Duncan
11/6/2021 10:45:37 pm
Family relationships can be difficult. Sometimes the best thing is to leave and find our own way.
Sue Clayton
12/6/2021 05:50:01 am
A tragic, evocative tale, Jim.
Fliss Zakaszewska
12/6/2021 03:58:49 pm
Lovely lines, the whole story is so well put together... unlike my own line here! Seriously, Jim. Beautiful, poignant and true of so many families.
Cindy Patrick
13/6/2021 05:09:25 pm
The last line was perfect, for this relatable, well told, story.
Jim Woessner
15/6/2021 03:38:44 am
Thanks, everyone, for the lovely comments. Comments are closed.
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