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Classic Red Sneakers, by Marjan Sierhuis

3/7/2020

 
Isla pondered the shoe display in the shop’s window, and she was mesmerized. The red leather shoes with the four-inch-heels beckoned her to come closer. She felt they would make the perfect companion for her little black dress. After she entered the shop, she tried on the shoes, and to the chagrin of her bunions and calf muscles bopped in front of a floor-length mirror. The following evening her new classic red sneakers and her little black dress proved to be an immediate success as she danced the night away. And her feet couldn’t have been happier.
Mary Wallace
3/7/2020 09:56:00 am

Happy feet and a smile are way more attractive than heels. Nice Story.

Marjan sierhuis
3/7/2020 03:10:59 pm

Thank you, Mary. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Don Tassone link
3/7/2020 12:05:53 pm

Gives new meaning to "sensible shoes." Loved it.

marjan sierhuis
3/7/2020 03:12:54 pm

Thank you for reading, Don. I am thrilled you liked it.

ED N. White
3/7/2020 02:40:31 pm

Very nice. It reminds me of the Johnny Otis song, "High-heeled sneakers."

marjan sierhuis
3/7/2020 03:16:31 pm

Thank you, Ed for reading and your your comment. Have a nice day.

Bobby Warner
3/7/2020 03:38:34 pm

Nice example of "'Comfort before beauty." Nice job.

marjan sierhuis
3/7/2020 05:57:56 pm

Thank you, Bobby for your kind words.

Krystyna
3/7/2020 05:10:11 pm

Thinking back, how did I ever wear stilettos? Not necessarily because I got wiser (add question mark). Rather the body got older.

Love your story, Marjan.

Marjan sierhuis
3/7/2020 06:05:30 pm

Thank you, Krystyna for taking the time to read. I am glad you enjoyed my story. Have a great weekend.

Gordon Lawrie
4/7/2020 12:24:19 am

I'm afraid we drones (males) will never understand what women see in uncomfortably high heels. Give me the happy smile any time.

Marjan sierhuis
4/7/2020 01:45:43 am

Women's relationship with high heels is complicated. Thank you, Gordon for your thoughts on the matter.

Sue Clayton
4/7/2020 04:32:05 am

Red sneakers with a little black; a great combination designed to impress much more than heels.

Marjan sierhuis
4/7/2020 02:44:24 pm

So true, Sue. Thank you for your comment.

Jim link
4/7/2020 04:15:55 pm

I'm with Gordon, and Sue. And with everyone else's comments - cute story.

Jim

Marjan sierhuis
4/7/2020 04:43:16 pm

Thank you, Jim for reading. I am glad you enjoyed the story.


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