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Clean Break, by Glo Curl

25/10/2024

13 Comments

 
Of course I miss her, but we both knew it was inevitable. My retirement brought its own challenges: who wants to be shackled to a dull, balding ex-accountant when there are plenty of exciting adventures to be had, with attractive, exciting people? I’m just glad we could be grown-up about the whole thing.
It’s strange, waking up alone, preparing my own meals, the day long quietness without the irritating drone of the hoover constantly interrupting my thoughts.
Which reminds me, I mustn’t forget to book next door’s cleaner for the morning I pick her up from the airport.

13 Comments
Krystyna
25/10/2024 03:38:08 pm

World needs to redefine the common image of retirees.

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Glo
26/10/2024 03:47:37 pm

Absolutely Krystyna. Some want to have fun, and why not?

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david milner
25/10/2024 07:48:35 pm

Love the humour, the pace, the serious side. Another cracker, Glo Curl.

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Glo
26/10/2024 03:49:52 pm

Wow, thank you David, I really appreciate that! I have my brother (and his wife) to thank for the inspiration, lol.

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Sivan Pillai
26/10/2024 05:06:38 am

Better to have a clean break than dragging on with the old, Glo.

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Tom Baldwin
26/10/2024 05:21:15 am

Great story of two entwined yet separate lives, Glo.

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Glo
26/10/2024 03:58:38 pm

Thank you, Tom. You've summed it up beautifully.

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david milner
26/10/2024 08:13:39 am

I can't remember if I submitted a comment earlier.
I like the humour, the pace, the serious side. Another Glo Curl cracker!

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Editor
26/10/2024 10:29:22 am

Don't worry, David, you're not losing it. There's sometimes a bit of a delay before comments can be approved at the moment.

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Glo
26/10/2024 04:02:20 pm

Thank you for continuing to oversee comments, Editor. I hope you will be able to take a rest from it before long.

Sue Clayton
27/10/2024 12:58:27 am

Retirement is not for the faint hearted.

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Glo
28/10/2024 10:47:57 am

Too true. A complete change of routine can be a burden. :(

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Don Tassone link
27/10/2024 11:29:43 pm

Clean break indeed. Well done, Glo.

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