Twenty years. Two decades in this place. Ten with good behaviour. I’ll be an old man by the time I’m out. I look at the wall through the cracks between my fingers and let my mind detach from my body and dissipate into the wild blue yonder.
The paint peeling from the walls is blue. Not lagoon blue, or teal, or ship shape navy. It’s pale, watery blue like my Baka’s eyes. Doc says blue is calming, but the separate spaces and locked doors give way to a colourless lie.
Twenty years. Two decades in this place. Ten with good behaviour. I’ll be an old man by the time I’m out. I look at the wall through the cracks between my fingers and let my mind detach from my body and dissipate into the wild blue yonder.
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Paul Freeman
15/9/2023 03:47:12 pm
He was lucky it was blue, then.
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Sue Clayton
16/9/2023 06:12:21 am
One way of passing the time.
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Christa Loughrey
16/9/2023 09:19:26 am
I love the link between the colour of the wall and Baka's eyes, providing a portal to escape into daydreams while incarcerated.
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T.L. Tomljanovic
21/9/2023 11:20:20 pm
Thank you so much for reading and commenting Christa. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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