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Disintegration, by Don Tassone

27/6/2025

 
Emily was about to finish a report when an email notification popped up on her computer screen. She clicked on it and was about to respond when her phone buzzed with a new text. As she was about to reply, her phone pinged, alerting her to a Zoom call in 10 minutes.

Emily closed her eyes and took a deep breath. Her whole body was vibrating.

Disintegration is when something is destroyed, broken up or falls apart. It used to be caused by great force and happen to objects. These days, it’s caused by small devices and happens to people.

Sivan Pillai
27/6/2025 09:25:41 am

With the emergence of new technology, things like your mobile phone can disintegrate you, Don.

Libby Belle link
27/6/2025 01:29:34 pm

Your story rings a bell, Don. On the flip side, I just overheard a woman saying to her friend with worry, as she kept picking up her cell phone and looking at it, "My phone hasn't rang all day. I wonder why? How strange...."

peppermint
27/6/2025 01:35:02 pm

Don's story is a reminder that we are "human beings" not "human doings." Respecting our state of being is healthier than attempting to prove how much we can do. Thanks for your usual wisdom, Don. Hope folks are listening.

Kathy K
27/6/2025 02:59:29 pm

And I would like to thank peppermint for such words of wisdom. Our thought trains become fractured with all these interruptions to the point that, as Don says they actually disintegrate us. We’re no longer connected entirely.

Krystyna
27/6/2025 03:25:52 pm

I’d be “vibrating” with all that happening simultaneously. Darn those electronic devices! Do we have the choice to ignore them?

Cheryl Dahlstrand
27/6/2025 04:03:24 pm

So is spontaneous combustion.
Charles Dickens predicted this.
Reinterpretation of a classic!

Jim Bartlett link
27/6/2025 04:20:31 pm

Not to mention that we've replaced face to face with a ding and a ping.
Nicely done, Don.
Jim

Pamela Kennedy
27/6/2025 05:14:16 pm

So sad and so true...

Don Tassone link
28/6/2025 02:59:56 pm

Thank you all for your thoughtful comments.

Sue Clayton
29/6/2025 03:02:21 am

Well said.

Don Tassone link
29/6/2025 04:44:27 am

Thanks, Sue.


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