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Goldilocks, by Linda Lowe

20/11/2020

 
Years later, her locks gone white, she sits rocking, most everything behind her but the memory of that afternoon in the woods. She’d been called impudent, brazen—big words for a girl just six. What else to do but plan her demise? She wanted a large funeral, with violins. She was famous, after all. Would be until all the books disappeared from the face of the earth. She would be known by her name, Goldilocks, whereas the bears were just a little family. A mother who cooked, a father who did nothing to speak of, a youngster who whined. Nameless.
Sandra James
20/11/2020 10:18:01 am

Great story, Linda! I really enjoyed it :)

Linda
21/11/2020 12:40:27 am

thank you!

Mary Wallace
20/11/2020 12:47:37 pm

I always thought she was a little hard done by. The bears didn't even get names.😊

Romeo
20/11/2020 03:09:05 pm

What a different and interesting angle, Linda. Enjoyed your story very much.

Jim Woessner
20/11/2020 03:44:05 pm

Great and clever twist. Thanks.

Rod Drake
20/11/2020 06:49:56 pm

The price of fame - nice story, well told

Susan F. Reid
20/11/2020 08:33:32 pm

Linda, Funny story about Goldilocks.

Sue Clayton
21/11/2020 12:15:53 am

The star of the show. Even if all the books disappear bet you'll still be able to find the fairy tale on the internet. Lovely look at an ageing Goldilocks.

LInda
21/11/2020 12:39:30 am

Thanks very much


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