Berkah swept the ground vigorously. He wanted to ensure that everything was perfect for his queen. He had stirred awake at 4, wondering if the disinfectant was too strong for her. He had run to his master’s house, woken his disgruntled co-workers and borrowed an effective disinfectant with mild odour. Her food was ready too, a tasty combination of vitamins and minerals. Berkah looked up reverently as his queen stepped into her lair, her head high. Her coat sparkled with his care and her silky mane flew in the breeze. She neighed gratefully at the delicious scent of fresh grass.
Mimi Grouse
30/9/2022 02:34:02 pm
Lovely, lucky horse.
Padmini
1/10/2022 09:50:48 am
Thanks a lot, Mimi:) The horse stable below my condo inspired this story.
Krystyna
30/9/2022 05:51:15 pm
Cute! Didn’t see the beautiful creature as the queen of your story until the fact was cleverly revealed. Beautifully worded, Padmini.
Padmini
1/10/2022 09:49:29 am
Thank you so much, Krystyna:)
Padmini
1/10/2022 09:48:56 am
Hi Jim,
Paritosh Chandra Dugar
1/10/2022 10:44:58 am
A lovely story with a surprise ending. Well done, Padmini.
Padmini
5/10/2022 12:01:07 pm
Thank you, Paritosh:)
Padmini
5/10/2022 11:59:53 am
Thanks a lot for commenting, Don
Marjan sierhuis
1/10/2022 10:48:57 pm
A delightful story, Padmini.
Padmini Krishnan
5/10/2022 11:59:08 am
Thank you so much, Marjan
Sue Clayton
2/10/2022 05:57:06 am
Every horse deserves a Berkah to care for them. He is the King of the stables.
Padmini Krishnan
5/10/2022 11:58:34 am
You are right:) Thank you, Sue Comments are closed.
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