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In Memoria, by Sue Clayton

4/8/2022

14 Comments

 
In full regimental uniform he beams out from a silver frame. Lavish blooms adorn the old man’s marble grave.

“Colonel Duncan McDowall…an officer who served his country well.”

Gold-etched words glisten in the sun’s rays. His family has ensured that Colonel McDowall’s memorial reflects his wealth and status.

Beneath a numbered wooden cross stands a jam jar filled with spring flowers. You need to visit the records office to know who lies here.

But his memorial doesn’t need gold engraving on marble; he is etched onto his family’s heart.

“Private Jimmy Downie… fatally wounded during the Battle of Monte Casino”.
14 Comments
David Milner
4/8/2022 06:37:01 pm

We salute you too, Sue C.

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Jennifer Duncan
4/8/2022 07:47:44 pm

"he is etched unto his family's heart" - what a beautiful line in a beautiful story.

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Jim Bartlett link
4/8/2022 08:54:46 pm

Jimmy's wealth and status came from the heart.
So sad, but so well done, Sue
Jim

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Angela Carlton link
4/8/2022 11:01:53 pm

Lovely, moving, a vivid scene.

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Don Tassone
5/8/2022 02:24:19 am

"At the end of the game, the king and the pawn go back in the same box." Well done, Sue.

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Sivan Pillai
5/8/2022 05:39:39 am

As he is etched in the hearts of those who loved him, there is no need for gold-etched words. Very touching, Sue.

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Jenny Logan
5/8/2022 12:42:59 pm

Very touching, Sue. Nicely done.

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Marjan Sierhuis
5/8/2022 10:44:33 pm

Well written, Sue.

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Cindy Patrick
6/8/2022 02:40:50 am

Imagery, with tender feelings. It's a wonderfully written piece, Sue.

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Mimi Grouse
6/8/2022 06:19:02 am

Beautiful.

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Rashna Walton
6/8/2022 02:59:44 pm

touchingly written Sue.

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Candace Arthuria
8/8/2022 01:22:35 pm

Lately, I've been intrigued by juxtaposition. Wrenching example, Sue. Well done, as always. God rest their souls.

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Krystyna
8/8/2022 11:24:19 pm

Heartwarming and heartbreaking simultaneously, Sue. Another perfect piece mastered by you. (Incidentally, my father was a soldier with the Polish regiment at Monte Casino.)

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Sue Clayton
9/8/2022 05:18:30 am

Thanks, everyone.

Krystyna, my father was also at Monte Casino with the British Army. Our fathers will be forever etched on our hearts.

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