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Journey's End, by Julie Turland

25/4/2025

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Belching and hissing, we approach a once thriving station. My brakes shriek with anger. Puffing my battered body shows signs of age. I watch the passengers alight, their faces etched with melancholy, as I sense the age of innocence dies.

A mournful whistle, as the lights fade and the soft sounds of Auld Lang Syne fill the air, before the gates close on yet another station.

The future begins tomorrow, leaving no room for the past. One more journey, my destination, oblivion. Maybe one day your grandchildren will ask you about the time proud engines like mine served without complaint.

8 Comments
Robert
26/4/2025 03:24:18 am

Hi Julie...I like this story. "Locomotives"...the mascot of my old high school's athletic and club teams. Ages ago there was a huge marshalling yard in my hometown and these steam locomotives were always coming and going...great huge black machines belching steam and burning coal. Cool story. Fond memories...

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julie turland
2/5/2025 10:51:41 am

Thank you so much I only have a very vague memory of them, although we now have the GCR heritage station where I live and I have also travelled on the West Somerset Line and that is nice. You can imagine how it must have been like x

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Sue Clayton
26/4/2025 04:13:25 am

I always loved journeys in a steam train. RIP a bygone age.

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Julie Turland
2/5/2025 10:55:19 am

Thanks Sue

I think it is sad that progress as they called it took over and with it the end of an era. We seem to have lost such a lot since those days I think x

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Christa Loughrey
26/4/2025 07:49:56 pm

Such a lovely touch of nostalgia, Julie.

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Julie Turland
2/5/2025 10:58:40 am

Thank you Christa x

They say progress and I get as more people started to own cars then the need for the trains and the little community stations lessened and now we are being urged to leave cars at home x

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Cheryl Dahlstrand
26/4/2025 10:50:52 pm

Nostalgic memories of a train and symbolic of memories we all have.

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Julie Turland
2/5/2025 11:00:04 am

Thank you

I wanted to tie in the end of an era with growing old. Plus to bring memories back to people who remember the days of the steam engine and the little stations that linked villages and towns x

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