Just a Note, by Don Tassone

6/11/2020

I used to ride my bike to the store for my mom. I bought all our groceries. We had only one car, and my dad drove it to work.

I was way too young to buy cigarettes, but my mom knew Mr. Albers, the store owner, and she gave me a note saying it was okay.

That was about 70 years ago. Now I live in a place where I’m not allowed to smoke. I wish I had a note.

Paritosh Chandra Dugar

6/11/2020 08:02:33 am

Ha Ha. What a twist! Well done, Don.

peppermint

6/11/2020 11:39:53 am

TIMING IS EVERYTHING!

Susan Reid

6/11/2020 11:44:35 am

Nice story in few words.

Pamela Kennedy

6/11/2020 01:09:41 pm

Don, your story brought back memories of doing that for my mom...boy, times have changed.

Bobby Warner

6/11/2020 02:11:05 pm

A near perfect flash fiction story, Don. Take five stars on this one!

Kathy K.

6/11/2020 03:15:41 pm

Thank you for the smile, Don. You are a master at delivering the unexpected.

David

7/11/2020 11:28:50 am

Great, as always, Don. I'm enjoying your latest book too.

Don Tassone link

7/11/2020 12:53:53 pm

I'm delighted your enjoying the stories in New Twists, David. Thanks for letting me know.

Don Tassone

7/11/2020 12:55:42 pm

Oops. I mean you're, not your. :)

Don Tassone link

7/11/2020 12:52:08 pm

Thank you all for your comments. I'm glad you enjoyed this story.

Sue Clayton

8/11/2020 02:45:20 am

At least he made it to 70 plus years. My mum wouldn't have been so trusting. Nice story.

Mary Wallace

9/11/2020 04:55:28 am

Beautiful little tale..twisted well.

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