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In root cellar gloom, they huddle. Onions. Whispering verse in dialect of tear and soil. You chop one for dinner, unaware it’s broadcasting elegies straight into your skull. “Just sulphur,” you sniff, eyes slick as wet pavement. But they know. Each layer peels back a stanza, each ring a rhyming couplet from the enzyme subconscious. At market, they sit in crates, silent yet screaming sestinas. Heaney’s ghost nods digging through peat. He'd bought a bag of onions and bled verse into the receipt. Later, alone, the onions hum melancholy haiku, and somewhere, a man weeps without knowing why, bread unbuttered.
Mimi Grouse
19/7/2025 05:49:06 am
Finding the sublime in the mundane. A memorable little tale. Well done, Paul.
Sue Clayton
20/7/2025 03:00:43 am
Wow!
david milner
20/7/2025 07:14:34 am
Each layer peels back a stanza
Glo Curl
21/7/2025 03:23:13 pm
Absolutely superb Paul. Love it, and I think Heaney would too.
Christa Loughrey
22/7/2025 08:30:33 am
I really enjoyed this unusual story, Paul. Bet I end up reciting something when I peel onions in the future.
Cheryl Dahlstrand
22/7/2025 10:43:36 pm
Lyrical- made me cry! Comments are closed.
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