Jane clutched an old red Nokia 3210 mobile phone, remembering Tom's last words: "I love you." She brushed a tear away.
A hand gently touched her arm. "Come on, Mum, let's go home. It doesn't get any easier, does it?"
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As she did that same day each year, Jane sat on the park bench, gazing at the gap in the skyline where Tom had once worked. Why, she asked herself? Thousands dead in the aeroplanes, in the buildings, and amongst the emergency workers; countless thousands more in the years of reprisals that followed. What God could condone such unspeakable evil?
Jane clutched an old red Nokia 3210 mobile phone, remembering Tom's last words: "I love you." She brushed a tear away. A hand gently touched her arm. "Come on, Mum, let's go home. It doesn't get any easier, does it?" 11/9/2020 07:59:20 am
The day will always be a lifetime of reflection. A soft heartbreaking one. Liked it, Gordon!
swapan k Banerjee
11/9/2020 10:24:31 am
A heart-tugging tale, Gordon.
Sandra James
11/9/2020 10:30:37 am
Wonderfully bittersweet - I enjoyed it very much!
Krystyna
11/9/2020 03:10:47 pm
You vividly portrayed the heartache of so many on this chilling anniversary day, Gordon. 9/11 is replayed every day in the lives of those who lost loved ones. But on this date, it hurts even more.
Pamela Kennedy
11/9/2020 09:20:03 pm
Thank you, Gordon, for remembering.
Sue Clayton
12/9/2020 02:36:49 am
Your story is a wonderful memorial to those who perished on that Armageddon of a day, Gordon. RIP 9/11.
Mary Wallace
12/9/2020 11:43:17 am
So many to be remembered on such a day. Thankyou for reflecting. Comments are closed.
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