Serena felt hands trying to touch her through the skin veil. She could hear her new mother’s pride, father’s joy, aunt’s envy and brother’s confusion. She floated around the fluid, wanting to go back to her old life and the children she left behind. Serena opened her mouth, but could not scream. Her kicking legs hardly reached beyond the fluid. When she was taken out, Serena let out a last cry for her past life. Then she blissfully forgot everything. She was now ready to start a new life as a boy called Adam.
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Pamela Kennedy
24/6/2022 11:31:08 am
A reincarnation nicely described,
Marjan Sierhuis
24/6/2022 11:58:08 am
A unique tale. Nicely told, Padmini. 24/6/2022 03:39:47 pm
Well done, Padmini.
Krystyna
24/6/2022 03:42:26 pm
A breathtaking moment. A new life to live. A beautiful story of hope, Padmini.
Sivan Pillai
25/6/2022 05:08:29 am
We all have to severe our ties with the past and move forward. Beautiful story, Padmini.
Sue Clayton
25/6/2022 06:48:54 am
Once more rebirth and birth entwine.
Paritosh Chandra Dugar
25/6/2022 09:05:21 am
A beautiful description of attachment to the past life and detachment from it through rebirth. Well written, Padmini.
Padmini Krishnan
28/6/2022 09:32:39 am
Thank you so much, friends, for taking the time to read and comment on my story:)
Lorraine Murphy
30/6/2022 08:39:30 am
A great story Padmini, really enjoyed it.
Alyce
1/7/2022 01:53:15 am
Excellent story, Padmini! Wow! Comments are closed.
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