Remember when you asked me why I never left you. Did there need to be a reason? There’s never a rhyme or reason with love.”
Cynthia kissed him and kissed him again. Their time together was coming to a close.
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“Seth, honey, please…don’t go…not yet. I knew back then you were suffering from some inner turmoil. Those were dark days when there was hardly a happy moment among your sullen moods. But the turbulent times passed and you stopped hiding behind the bottle. Laughter and lightheartedness replaced your growls and scowls and life became fun again.
Remember when you asked me why I never left you. Did there need to be a reason? There’s never a rhyme or reason with love.” Cynthia kissed him and kissed him again. Their time together was coming to a close.
Sandra James
27/5/2022 11:29:34 am
So many sad stories today 😥 At least they had some good times. Well done, Pamela!
Mary Anne Mc Enery.
27/5/2022 11:40:00 am
There's no rhyme or reason with love! A beautiful line.Thank you Pamela for your graceful story.
Jenny Logan
27/5/2022 12:53:59 pm
Awww, poor Cynthia. Nicely written, Pamela.
Cindy Patrick
27/5/2022 02:27:33 pm
No one can say why we love! I love this...she has her reasons. I shed a tear.
Padmini
27/5/2022 02:50:34 pm
Desperate attempt by Cynthia. Unfortunately, you can never stop somebody if they are meant to go
Paritosh Chandra Dugar
27/5/2022 06:01:09 pm
I loved the lyrical style of your writing. Well written, Pamela.
Candace Arthuria Williams
27/5/2022 07:38:43 pm
God bless Cynthia for hanging in there for as long as she was needed. I think they'll both be all right now.
Sue Clayton
28/5/2022 04:41:56 am
Until death us do part. Never a truer word spoken in this turbulent, but triumphant, love story.
Sivan Pillai
28/5/2022 05:17:32 am
True love doesn't need a reason. So well written, Pamela.
Krystyna
28/5/2022 06:08:45 am
How tragic true love can be. A poignant piece, Pamela.
Pamela Kennedy
28/5/2022 07:19:14 pm
I greatly appreciate all of your comments. Enjoy your week and stay safe.
David Milner
31/5/2022 11:21:10 am
Tender a sweet, Pamela.
Pamela Kennedy
2/6/2022 04:08:17 pm
Thank you, David, for commenting on my story. Comments are closed.
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