Editor's Choice Nestled deep within a valley on a dirt road, straddling a babbling creek, was the proud historical landmark. The weathered wooden boards, a testament to its longevity. Beautiful by day, against the picturesque backdrop of fall foliage, until nightfall brought a sinister chill, reminiscent of Ichabod’s flaming jack-o-lantern. As a seasoned policeman, I was not immune to feelings of dread and the remembrance of childhood fears. Stopping short of the entrance, the squad car headlamps showed into its throat and illuminated its ribs, before diluting into darkness. With every hair pricked, I held my breath and stomped on the gas.
Scott Bogart
16/11/2022 03:35:23 am
Thank you so much, Jim.
Doug
29/10/2022 04:48:55 am
Nicely done Scott. I felt I was right there with the officer.
Scott Bogart
16/11/2022 03:36:12 am
Thank you Doug! That officer might have been me.
Sue Clayton
29/10/2022 08:27:42 am
So many beautiful daytime scenes can descend into the dark realms of nightmares by night.
Scott Bogart
16/11/2022 03:36:42 am
So true, Sue.
Jennifer Duncan
29/10/2022 01:02:33 pm
Lots of atmosphere. The apprehension is palpable.
Scott Bogart
16/11/2022 03:37:10 am
Thank yoy, Jennifer.
Shoshauna Shy
29/10/2022 10:18:43 pm
Lots of atmosphere; I was right there all along. Kudos!
Scott Bogart
16/11/2022 03:37:57 am
Thank you Shoshauna. I appreciate it.
Mimi Grouse
31/10/2022 04:20:31 am
That's a powerful piece of writing. Impressive!
Scott Bogart
16/11/2022 03:38:42 am
Oh wow! I'm glad you think so. Thank you!
Cheryl Dahlstrand
1/11/2022 02:42:55 pm
A well placed cultural reference to Washington Irving provides story depth and supports visualization.
Scott Bogart
16/11/2022 03:40:36 am
Thank you, Cheryl. I almost didn't use it. I was a bit leary The Headless Horseman may have ridden off into the sunset.
Alyce
3/11/2022 11:24:26 pm
I felt the officer's dread. Well done.
Scott Bogart
16/11/2022 03:41:09 am
Thank you, Alyce. Comments are closed.
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