Eighteen, unemployed, and undereducated, Mark despaired about his future. With few job opportunities, he joined the army where he learned how to kill. There was much to learn, but he was a natural. When he deployed to Afghanistan, his parents, his church, the entire town was proud of him. The local newspaper wrote a feature article about him. When he returned home, he could find only part-time work. He began drinking too much and using drugs. He was still young, but he had a skill. Three years later, Mark used that skill on himself. His obituary called him a hero.
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Sandra James
16/10/2020 09:34:30 am
So sad, Jim, and I hate to think how often this scenario has happened. Very well written!
Jim Woessner
16/10/2020 04:01:43 pm
Thanks. I wish it was fiction.
Pamela Kennedy
16/10/2020 11:54:25 am
Your story touched me, Jim.
Jim Woessner
16/10/2020 04:02:10 pm
Thanks, Pamela. I wish it was fiction.
John Cooper
16/10/2020 06:44:46 pm
Very moving and powerful story Jim.
Jim Woessner
19/10/2020 10:05:34 pm
Thanks, John.
Mary Wallace
16/10/2020 11:03:36 pm
We equip these young boys with a skill, without the education on how to handle it. Obviously peace is out of our reach, humans being in human, so perhaps we need training schools for returned soldiers so they can function back home.
Jim Woessner
19/10/2020 10:07:39 pm
Knowing these kids personally, I wish I was better at writing fiction. Unfortunately, I'm better at writing nonfiction and calling it fiction. Thanks, Mary.
Jennifer Lai
17/10/2020 01:05:37 am
The brevity of your words speaks volumes. Well done. While posted her on FFF, this story unfortunately rings true for many families.
Jim Woessner
19/10/2020 10:08:00 pm
Thanks, Jennifer.
Sue Clayton
17/10/2020 03:28:21 am
So often we let down our returned troops. they give their all and we give them nothing in return. Only a cessation of global wars will give them their true reward...world peace.
Jim Woessner
19/10/2020 10:09:20 pm
Wouldn't that be nice? I've been in the world too long to believe that peace will ever be achieved. Perhaps in my heart, but I have doubts about that, as well. Comments are closed.
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