By August, the house felt like it was slowly letting go of him—peeling away, one loose hinge, one wayward brick at a time.
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Dad had stopped fixing the fence, left the planks leaning like broken teeth. He stopped watering the garden, too; tomatoes went soft and burst on the vine. His fishing gear stayed piled in the truck, rust blooming over the hooks. He wore the same flannel shirt all summer, even in the heat, fraying at the cuffs. No more Sunday pancakes or big pots of stew, just warm beer and boxes of crackers stacked by the recliner.
By August, the house felt like it was slowly letting go of him—peeling away, one loose hinge, one wayward brick at a time.
Louise Arnott
25/7/2025 09:31:37 pm
You’ve done a great job with the emotion of the piece, the last line works well.
Pamela Kennedy
26/7/2025 07:59:47 am
Well done!
Sue Clayton
27/7/2025 03:53:40 am
Reads like a great metaphor for depression.
Glo Curl
27/7/2025 11:47:28 am
This is great writing. Comments are closed.
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