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Victorious, by Bobby Warner

6/11/2020

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He came from his office walking stooped over, as though he were ill; faint. There would be no victory celebration that night.

"Are you alright, Mr. President?"

"Fine, fine," he said, waving the aide away.

It was finished, all the furor of election over. He was also finished, having lost.

He went quickly and furtively to his small Private Room, where no one but he was ever allowed.

A shot rang out, a dozen rushed to investigate.

Slumped across his desk, he lay partially covering his words, written on an old manual typewriter. "THEY TRIED, BUT THEY CANNOT DEFEAT ME!"
10 Comments
Paritosh Chandra Dugar
6/11/2020 04:45:00 pm

Foolish obstinacy well described. Well done, Bobby.

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Sandra James
6/11/2020 06:54:46 pm

As the world waits...

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Michael Roberts
6/11/2020 07:03:17 pm

Wouldn't surprise me...But interesting take on potential history.

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Bobby Warner
7/11/2020 12:06:01 am

I've never had much power, political or otherwise; but I imagine that those who have, have found it hard to give up! Thanks for reading, and thanks for commenting.

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Sivan Pillai
7/11/2020 03:09:52 am

Power corrupts. Nice story, Bobby.

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Sue Clayton
7/11/2020 05:54:00 am

I do hope he's able to accept defeat, if that's the case, and that it would never come to this. But who knows.

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John Cooper
7/11/2020 01:11:52 pm

One way to take defeat but probably not the best. Well written.

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Ramon Oteiza
7/11/2020 07:09:32 pm

Good story of a fictional president. Trump, of course, can't type.

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Bobby Warner
7/11/2020 11:57:46 pm

You're right, Ramon. This is a fictional character; rather, a generic character who holds tight to the reins of power--even in defeat and in his own mind! There have been many of this stripe--and I am sure there shall be many more. 'Tis part and parcel of the human condition, which, ultimately (at least in my opinion), is what we writers love to explore more than any other topic. Thanks for you comment!

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Mary Wallace
9/11/2020 04:22:27 am

This would save a lot of legal hassles.

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