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Wisps of Wishes, by Swapan K Banerjee

20/11/2020

 
I visit the place after decades. An invisible presence takes me down the zigzaggy route in drowsy quiet. A certain bend motions me to pause. I see a path branching off and stretching away to a blurring point.

The clock turns back in an instant.

I remember it leads to a temple where she and I once tied a piece of cloth carrying our names around the trunk of a wish-fulfilling tree. I feel the stirring in memory’s dying roots.

Does it still exist?

There’re more paper tags than leaves on the tree, hanging from its branches like torn kites.

Pamela Kennedy
20/11/2020 07:45:35 am

Such a sweet sentimental story, Swapan...most enjoyable!

Mary Wallace
20/11/2020 12:40:34 pm

Wisps of memories. Very evocative Swapan.

Sivan Pillai
20/11/2020 01:05:41 pm

Incidents that one can never forget. Great story, Swapan.

Krystyna
20/11/2020 03:31:27 pm

A “wish-fulfilling” tree. Splendid! Your eloquent description allows readers to visualize well, taking us back to an emotional connection too strong to ignore. Beautiful story, Swapan.

Marjan sierhuis
20/11/2020 03:36:25 pm

A lovely story, Swapan.

Bobby Warner
20/11/2020 03:56:20 pm

"...the stirring in memory's dying roots..." What a wonderful visual image. Very poetic. Liked it a lot.

Sue Clayton
21/11/2020 12:02:49 am

One of many "wishing places" around the world. We can only hope that these places have granted many wishes. Many tags on the tree would suggest that people believe in its magic power.

Swapan k Banerjee
21/11/2020 09:38:43 am

Thank you Pamela, Mary, Sivan, Krystyna, Marjan, Bobby & Sue for your kind and thoughtful remarks.


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