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13 Men, by Doug Bartlett

13/5/2022

18 Comments

 
The sun was beginning to set and it would soon be Friday. The bedraggled men slowly made their way up the dilapidated stairs. They entered the room one by one and properly placed themselves at the dining room table, totalling thirteen in all. They all looked forward to this special meal, not just for its ceremonial significance but also that it would include meat, which was a luxury they could rarely afford.This would be their last meal they would enjoy together for quite some time.

Little did they know they were establishing the origination of a custom that would last for millenia.

Friday was nearly upon them, the number thirteen was hanging over them and death’s shadow was appearing upon the horizon. It was truly an eerie combination.

In a short period of time the leader of this motley crew would be dead.

He would experience an excruciating death that was beyond imagination.

Was the leader unlucky as we have come to associate Friday the thirteenth to be?

Or was He in complete control, voluntarily giving up His life for our benefit and later would return back to life?

Each one of us will make our own decision of which one it is.

It is a decision of tremendous magnitude.

Decide well my friend.
18 Comments
Mike Uptain
13/5/2022 05:12:21 am

I have chosen!

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Doug
13/5/2022 09:43:44 am

Thanks for your comment Mike.

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Michael Borjon
13/5/2022 05:36:21 am

Well done Doug!!! Since I don’t believe in luck, I chose your second choice many years ago…

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Doug
13/5/2022 09:45:05 am

Thank you Mike. I appreciate your comment.

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Jim Bartlett link
13/5/2022 04:32:18 pm

A tale well told, Doug
Jim

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Doug
13/5/2022 05:01:46 pm

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment Jim.

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Candace Arthuria Williams
13/5/2022 08:43:24 pm

"....I will not drink henceforth of this fruit of the vine, until that day when I drink it new with you in my Father's kingdom." I've already decided. Thank you, Doug.

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Doug
13/5/2022 09:17:15 pm

I look forward in sharing a drink with you someday. Thank you Candace.

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Dee Lorraine
13/5/2022 08:55:10 pm

As for me and my house....Thank you, Doug.

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Doug
13/5/2022 09:18:31 pm

Thank you Dee for several reasons.

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Sue Clayton
14/5/2022 04:55:03 am

When you look around the world today you'd have to say he sacrificed his life in vain. For some countries every day is as unlucky as Friday 13th.

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Doug
14/5/2022 06:03:24 am

Yes, we are blessed to be living where we do.

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Padmini
14/5/2022 02:00:42 pm

Second choice:) Thank you for the lovely story.

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Doug
14/5/2022 04:35:01 pm

Thank you Padmini for taking the time to leave your nice comment.

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Georgeanne Borjon
14/5/2022 04:02:03 pm

I made my decision a long time ago. He was in complete control. Thanks for a great story, Doug.

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Doug
14/5/2022 04:36:11 pm

Thank you Georgeanne for your nice comment.

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Chuck
15/5/2022 03:44:24 am

He's still in control.

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Doug
15/5/2022 05:42:46 am

Thank you for your comment Chuck.

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