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A Fateful Day, by Sankar Chatterjee

20/7/2017

 
On a gorgeous summer day, Native American Chief Flying Eagle was watching a live baseball game on his modern smartphone screen, the game being played in Phoenix, 320 kilometers away. He was born and grew up in a nearby Navajo Reservation. The land was kept aside as a part of a treaty between the past members of his tribe and the citizens of a newly liberated nation. Suddenly, he began to remember his own early childhood days growing up with no access to a phone, a refrigerator, a car, or a TV. The children then grew up playing “hide and seek” in the hidden narrow canyons that reflected gorgeous colors when the sun was high in sky. Later the tribal leaders, to earn some extra revenue for the community members, decided to open some of these canyons to the outside world and he became one of the earliest guides.

Without any warning, his memory then took him back to that fateful day in his youth, three decades ago. Like today, it had been also a brilliant summer day. He was guiding a group of foreign tourists from Europe and Asia through the passages of one such narrow canyon, also called a slot canyon, built mainly of sandstone and limestone. In addition, he was also helping them to find the correct corners to capture the beauty of the place in light and shadow with their cameras. Outside, the sky as seen through the opening at the top, was clear and blue with no trace of any threatening rain cloud. And that’s when, everyone heard a loud distant noise. Though startled, the group moved forward, inching upwards. However, the intensity of the noise started to magnify, soon changing it to the sound of a downward rolling thunder. Looking upward, all saw as if a huge locomotive engine was coming downhill in full speed and in no time, the mass hit them with a violent force. In reality, it was a flash flood formed from a torrential downpour into a canyon basin and flooding it, ten kilometers away. Finding its way downward, the body of water picked up loose boulders and broken branches of trees to strengthen its force of destruction. Growing up in the area and having the experience of swimming in downhill swift water, Chief Flying Eagle was able to survive the calamity, while all eleven tourists that he was in charge of, perished that day.

With advancement of modern technology in predicting suddenly developing weather patterns over a narrow region, the entrance points of all these narrow canyons have now been equipped with gathering latest information directly from the National Weather Service. But, that’s no solace to Chief Flying Eagle. As he continued to watch the live game on his modern gadget, the face of each smiling tourist from that day started to flash on his mind.

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