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Banana Kanu, by Andrew Carter

27/2/2021

 
FOOD
Fishers are highly respected in the Tanigawa community. Their profession requires courage and tenacity to work in constantly changing conditions and the sea can be both a kind, and cruel, employer. It’s an interesting life if you love the dynamics of the ocean and the thrill of the catch. Every day brings something new.

Many myths have been conceived from a fisher’s experience. For instance, if you are a skipper, you should never go to sea on a Friday or you put both yourself, and your crew, in grave danger. And, you should never shake your fists at God when the fish are quiet. History declares that vessels are apt to sink from such foolish errors of judgement.

It’s also common knowledge amongst fishers that taking bananas to sea brings bad luck. It is this same outlandish myth which this story explores where it is proven false by the innocent action of a new recruit.

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In all his years at sea, Takai had never seen anyone foolish enough to take the yellow-skinned fruit out on a fishing trip, let alone to imbibe in eating it on such an important expedition.
Now, right in front of him, a wet-behind-the-ears greenhorn breaks with tradition before his wrinkled own eyes, in the bow of the kanu. Contrasting the soft expression on his innocent face, the greenhorn’s lips slowly part into the shape of a letter ‘o’ before swallowing the evil yellow fruit.

Takai’s eyes widen. He is about to throttle the smiling greenhorn for this arrogant act. He had warned him about taking bananas to sea, along with other myths like holding your tongue the wrong way, which is also known to bring ill-fortune.

“What are you doing?” Takai spits. “Throw it overboard or you’ll have us killed.”

The new recruit scratches his cheek then rubs his chin in confusion.

“The banana, you idiot. Chuck it overboard.” Takai commands.

The newcomer, frightened by Takai’s tone, gulps down one last bite.

“NOW.” Takai’s face reddens.

The wannabe fisher throws the slippery skin. It slips through his fingers before sliding under Takai’s foot at the stern. Takai steps on the deadly aberration. His eyes gleam with murderous rage and his hands flail as he lands backwards into the ocean with a scream. He treads water for a moment, before swimming back towards the canoe, and the frightened recruit.

Once back onboard, Takai blasts the careless greenie with a deathly spray.

The greenhorn seafarer does something most unusual. He looks straight past the advancing old sea dog. Takai turns and his jaws drop. A wave as large as Mt Fuji looms in the distance. He mouths a potent word with dread.

“Tsunami.”

The two are doomed with the rest of the fleet as the massive, banana-shaped wave rises above them, and swallows them up.

The greenhorn is the only survivor. He dispels the myth swearing he was given the energy to hold fast to the kanu by eating that forbidden, potassium-rich banana.
Susan Reid
27/2/2021 02:55:08 pm

Great suspense, Andrew.

Andrew Carter
28/2/2021 02:16:11 am

Thanks, Susan. I'm starting to find my sea legs writing suspense.

Sandra James
27/2/2021 09:36:38 pm

Well done, Andrew, a great ending. I'd never heard of the no-bananas superstition (but, of course, I immediately googled it!) and I love the way you used it in the story. My husband went fishing last week with his father (from the shore this time not on his boat) and took a banana with him. He didn't catch anything but his father did :) Maybe there is something...

Andrew Carter
28/2/2021 03:19:47 am

Myths are funny things, Sandra. Maybe they change as they are passed down through oral history. Much better fishing out of a boat, that's for sure. Tell your hubby to use pilchards for bait, not bananas, or he'll catchee monkey.

Mary Wallace
28/2/2021 12:51:52 am

There are two sides to every story. I think if I were the only survivor I'd consider that banana lucky too, although a tsunami out of nowhere ... you'd have to be wondering.

Andrew Carter
28/2/2021 02:25:18 am

Yes, two sides to sides to every story and sometimes enough to make you go bananas.
Tsunami warning systems weren't set up until 1960 following the Pacific-wide Tsunamis of 1946.They happened upon you suddenly. And, you can still see news visions today as people try to flee them.

Sue Clayton
28/2/2021 01:28:08 am

The banana gods were on his side. Loved the saga of the fishing trip, Andrew.

Andrew Carter
28/2/2021 02:28:40 am

Thanks. Glad you liked it, Sue. I can still remember fishers in Far Nth Queensland having phobias against bananas, and going to sea on Fridays. It's a mythtery how much we let ourselves be impacted by myths.


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