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Danny Boy, by Doug Bartlett

28/5/2021

 
He was, as so many others like him, forcibly removed from his native country and placed into a foreign land. He seemed brighter than the average immigrant. He had high morals and a strong work ethic. This did not go unnoticed by those in government leadership positions. He continued to work his way up this ladder, shouldering more responsibility with great success. Eventually he had established a strong relationship, even a friendship, with the supreme leader of that land and was placed in a well deserved position of high prominence.

This worked out well for everyone. Everyone except the group of non-immigrants surrounding him that were extremely jealous. They did not appreciate this man and conspired to do away with him.

How could they get rid of this man? He was so righteous. He always did the right thing. He even prayed aloud, as they observed when they walked by his house with the windows open at different times of the day.

They finally came up with a plot that would permanently get rid of him without jeopardizing themselves. They realized they could use his strength, his righteousness, against him. They would get the government leader to pass a law against prayer to anyone but the leader himself. The penalty would be to be tossed into a pit of hungry, wild animals, which would surely result in death.

When this news reached this man about this new law he had a decision to make. Would he now pray to a man instead of his God? Would he start praying secretly or stop altogether? No, he knew exactly what he would do. He never flaunted his faith but he never shrank from it either. He would continue to do what he had always done.

Within days he was heard breaking the law and was turned in. He was taken into the presence of the Leader and interrogated. He confessed and was quickly sentenced. He was to be thrown into the pit of wild animals that very night.

This troubled the leader greatly and he secretly hoped that his friend would somehow survive the night. He could hardly sleep and at sunrise he immediately headed to the pit. He could hardly wait to discover the outcome. As he entered the pit from above he shouted, “My friend, my friend, did your God save you from certain death?”

Arising from amidst the sleepy lions, “ Yes my friend, my faith has surely saved me, “ responded Daniel.
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Angela Carlton link
28/5/2021 02:02:50 pm

This is a mystical tale complete with a beutifully crafted ending.

doug
28/5/2021 03:19:42 pm

Thank you so much Angela.

Susan F. Reid
28/5/2021 02:24:15 pm

Beautiful story, Doug.

Doug
28/5/2021 03:21:53 pm

Thank you for that nice comment Susan.

Pamela Kennedy
28/5/2021 02:57:15 pm

Life is nothing without faith...very nicely written, Doug.

Doug
28/5/2021 03:24:14 pm

I couldn't agree more Pamela. Thank you for commenting.

Jim link
28/5/2021 03:52:34 pm

Nicely done, Doug
Jim

Doug
28/5/2021 04:12:30 pm

Thank you Jim.

Krystyna
28/5/2021 04:33:19 pm

Gripping tale, had me hoping for a positive outcome, and it happened!
Excellent narrative, Doug.

Doug
28/5/2021 10:23:00 pm

Thank you Krystyna. I'm glad I didn't let you down.

Mike B
28/5/2021 05:38:45 pm

Enjoyed the read...
Another well written story Doug!!
A Great Lesson on Faith as well...

Doug
28/5/2021 10:25:09 pm

Thanks for the nice read Mike. Glad you enjoyed it.

Daniel Hybner
28/5/2021 06:14:34 pm

Wonderful retelling of a Biblical classic, Doug. One of my favorite prophets, for obvious reasons!

Doug
28/5/2021 10:26:34 pm

Thank you Daniel. I appreciate your comment.

Mike U
29/5/2021 03:24:44 am

Another good one Doug, thank you for the perspective!

Doug
29/5/2021 03:43:56 am

Thank you Mike for reading it and the nice comment.

Sue Clayton
29/5/2021 03:59:34 am

Daniel's faith in his lord and the lions had its just reward.

Doug
29/5/2021 04:45:42 am

Yes, they most certainly did. Thank you Sue.

Jennifer Duncan
29/5/2021 03:01:20 pm

Your biblical retellings are so well done. And what's not to love about Daniel. I like to think of the lions listening to God.

Doug
29/5/2021 05:11:46 pm

It may very well have happened that way. Thank you for your nice comment.

Mary Wallace
30/5/2021 04:01:42 am

Well told Doug. Daniel is a message for all of us to be true to what we know is right.

Doug
30/5/2021 07:04:43 am

Very well said Mary. Thank you for your nice comment.

Chuck J Anderson
6/6/2021 11:14:40 pm

Regarding Danny's faith - those who protested...got digested.


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