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Fall, by Don Tassone

8/11/2024

 
​“What are you reading?”

“A new book on the fall of the Roman Empire.”

“Sounds heavy.”

“Oh, it is.”

“What are you learning?”

“The reasons Rome fell were more internal than external.”

“How so?”

“Well, for starters, there was a gradual loss of civic virtue among the citizens of Rome.”

“Civic virtue?”

“You know, the qualities that are important for the success of a society.”

“Like?”

“Like caring more about the common welfare than individual interests.”

“I see. You’re talking about values.”

“That’s right. Romans lost sight of the values Rome was founded on.”

“Sounds familiar.”

“Yeah.”

“What else?”

“Rome entered a dark age, filled with superstition.”

“Superstition?”

“Believing in things that aren’t real.”

“You mean like we believe in things on the Internet?”

“Well, I guess.“

“What else?”

“Romans thought of themselves as superior.”

“A breed apart?”

“Yeah, and they began to feel entitled.”

“Entitled?”

“They had great wealth, but they forgot what it took to achieve it, all the hard work and sacrifice. They took things for granted.”

“That sounds familiar too. What about their economy?”

“Eventually, it collapsed.”

“Why?”


“Lots of reasons. High taxes, out-of-control government spending, a huge gap between the rich and poor. Some of the wealthiest people in Rome even fled to the countryside to avoid the taxman.”

“You mean like billionaires and their tax shelters today?”

“I guess so. Oh, and the empire also faced a severe labor shortage.”

“Why?”

“Remember that entitlement thing?”

“Oh, yeah. Anything else?”

“There was also rampant government corruption and great political instability.”

“How did that happen?”

“Remember that values thing?”

“Oh.”

Silence.

“Do you think the Romans had any idea they were in for a fall?”

“Maybe, but if they did, it was too late. They were once the greatest empire the world had ever known. But by the end, they’d come undone.”

“Poor bastards.”

“Yeah.”
Kathy K.
8/11/2024 04:32:32 pm

Ouch. There’s a lot of work to do.

Dee Lorraine
8/11/2024 06:46:25 pm

Perfect. Just perfect, Don.

peppermint
9/11/2024 01:41:12 pm

Truth is often painful. It becomes even more so when it's rejected. Thanks for your truthful view of today's world, Don.

Don Tassone link
9/11/2024 01:54:43 pm

Thank you all for your thoughtful comments.

Sue Clayton
10/11/2024 05:06:24 am

Let's hope empires of today don't fall too far and manage to pick themselves up again.

Don Tassone link
10/11/2024 01:28:43 pm

Yes, let's hope. Thanks, Sue.

Gordon Lawrie
10/11/2024 03:33:12 pm

Accurate from start to finish. Gibbons’ account of the decline of Rome was really a contemporaneous account of the decline of GB Ltd. I suppose the book continues to have relevance to today’s declining empires, too.

Don Tassone link
10/11/2024 04:19:35 pm

Yes. A cautionary tale. Thanks, Gordon.

Robert Bishop
12/11/2024 04:24:32 am

Don...interesting story. Enjoyed it. Oh yeah, that old civic virtue thing. Sounds archaic but needed more than ever now.

Don Tassone link
12/11/2024 11:25:26 pm

I agree. Thanks, Robert.

Tom Baldwin
12/11/2024 04:25:16 am

A lot of worrying parallels here, Don.

Don Tassone link
12/11/2024 11:23:54 pm

Too many. Thanks, Tom.


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