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Fountain of Blessing, by Doug Bartlett

26/8/2022

 
I pulled up outside my apartment complex and retrieved my bank deposit bag from my car. I was there to collect quarters from the laundry room that was located on the premises. This bag was perfect for collecting the quarters from the coin operated machines.
On my way to the laundry room I noticed a disheveled man going through the trash cans. I asked him what he was doing. In broken English he responded his name was Juan and he was a neighbor who lived in some apartments down the street and he was collecting aluminum cans for income.

Well, I went on my way and as I was emptying the machines into my bag that was about to overflow I got an idea. I shot up a quick prayer to God asking Him that Juan would still be there when I returned to my car.

He was there and in broken Spanish I asked him to give me his hands. When he held them out to me he apologized. I don’t know if it was because they were filthy and grimy or if he thought he was in trouble for what he was doing.

I began pouring out all the quarters into Juan’s hands. It looked like a silver fountain flowing from my hands into his hands. His look of concern turned into a quiet smile and he expressed his genuine, sincere gratitude.

Oh, the title of the story? The quarters flowing into Juan’s possession may have looked like a silver fountain bubbling over but it was not the real fountain of blessing. No, the real fountain of blessing was welling up inside of me as I realized I had done the right thing.
Marjan Sierhuis
26/8/2022 12:43:45 pm

A lovely story, Doug.

Doug
26/8/2022 01:27:02 pm

I'm glad you enjoyed it Marjan. Thank you.

Michael Borjon
26/8/2022 07:27:12 pm

Yes, I enjoyed the story very much!! A true heart warming story for sure…

Doug
26/8/2022 10:08:19 pm

Thank you Michael. Glad you enjoyed it.

Angela Carlton link
26/8/2022 09:03:52 pm

Visual and colorful like a movie scene.

Doug
26/8/2022 10:09:15 pm

Thank you so much Angela.

Jim Bartlett link
26/8/2022 09:22:19 pm

Nice one Doug
Jim

Doug
26/8/2022 10:10:03 pm

Thank you Jim.

Greg Hanger
27/8/2022 03:44:13 pm

I remember the day that this happened and how excited you were in helping out this man.

Doug
27/8/2022 05:19:03 pm

Thank you Greg for taking the time to read and comment.

Chuck
27/8/2022 09:54:18 pm

Like you, I can never repay what has been poured into my hands. But it's rewarding to try.

Doug
28/8/2022 01:26:38 am

Thanks for sharing that Chuck.

Sue Clayton
28/8/2022 08:03:52 am

We are all capable of allowing fountains to pour if we only look for where best they can flow.

Doug
29/8/2022 12:22:08 am

Very well said Sue. Thank you.


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