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Heartache Tonight, by Doug Bartlett

19/8/2022

 
The following story has song titles by the Eagles embedded in it. If you'd like to play, see how many you can find. I'll put in answer in the comment section in a few days – Doug Bartlett

I was the new kid in town and I can't tell you why, but I did not have a peaceful, easy feeling when I enrolled at my new high School. Perhaps, part of it was I overheard kids referring to my creative writing teacher, Mrs. Radigan, as a witchy woman.

I considered all my past English classes as wasted time, but her class was different. She brought out the best in me and the best of my love for expressing myself in written form. Thanks to her I was developing a talent I never realized I had.

You see, I could not take it easy in this class. It was the last resort. I would take it to the limit and give it everything I had. In a way I had nothing to lose, yet in a way I had everything to lose. I went out for sports but failed miserably. I then tried out for the band and choir which resulted in an even worse experience.

I doubt if Mrs. Radigan had the same feelings for me as I had for her. Was this just a sophomoric crush? If so, what would life be like after the thrill is gone?

Since I‘ve met Mrs. Radigan, life’s been good. I then realized this was not a crush, but I had become a victim of love, not some kind of superficial or tawdry love, but an unadulterated, respectful kind of love. She meant more to me than anything. My parents had created me but she had recreated me into an individual that now found purpose in this life.

Summer vacation was fast approaching and it became the longest summer break as I was so anxious to return to her class and pick up where we left off.

I was surprised when I went into her classroom so excited, only to see a substitute teacher standing at the front of the class.

“I am sorry to have to tell you this, but your teacher, Mrs. Radigan, was in an automobile accident three days ago and, unfortunately, did not survive.”

I thought she would be around forever, but now she’s already gone.

Will I ever try and love again?

I just don’t know.


And, from the editor, to get you started...
Jim Bartlett said that there are problems with The Eagles & YouTube in the US, so he kindly provided something else. Enjoy!
Jim Bartlett link
19/8/2022 03:04:01 pm

Fun story, Doug. I found quickly that you can check into the story, but you can never leave...
I'm sure I missed (or maybe added?) some Eagles' songs, but came up with 17.
Jim

Doug
19/8/2022 04:56:06 pm

Thanks Jim for playing. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll disclose my number in a couple of days.

Mike Uptain
19/8/2022 05:59:23 pm

Jim is better than me, I counted 14 at my reading.

Doug
19/8/2022 07:02:27 pm

Don't be too quick to sell yourself short Mike. Jim may have over counted.

Chuck
19/8/2022 10:46:58 pm

I guess I don't know that many Eagles tunes.. Just gonna take it easy.

Doug
20/8/2022 12:55:32 am

Very funny Chuck. Thanks for taking the time. to read my story.

Michael Borjon
20/8/2022 06:22:59 am

Fun Story Doug!!! I found lot of the titles, in a New York minute…I counted 15, but I didn’t go over the story with a fine tooth comb…

David Milner
20/8/2022 09:12:06 am

Don, Glenn and the boys would be happy with this tender, crafty tale. Take it to the limit, Doug.

Doug
20/8/2022 05:58:17 pm

Thank you David. "Take it to the limit" is my wife's credit card song.

Doug
20/8/2022 05:56:00 pm

Thank you Michael. I'll put the number up on Monday if you want to check back.

Marjan Sierhuis
20/8/2022 11:18:47 am

A creative way to pay homage to a wonderful band. Nicely done, Doug.

Doug
20/8/2022 05:59:34 pm

Thank you so much Marjan. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Doug
20/8/2022 06:34:01 pm

Thank you Gordon for your effort to enhance my story with a video and thank you Jim for your contribution. Both are greatly appreciated.

Doug
21/8/2022 10:46:26 pm

Thank you to all who took the time to read my story and comment. The correct answer is 15.

Mimi Grouse
26/8/2022 03:03:19 pm

Fun, and a good read.


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