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Her Fifteenth Birthday, by Malvina Perova

2/12/2022

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Instead of a present, Masha got a shot in her back and fell flat on the damp asphalt at her house gates. She thought she’d faint from pain, but shock kept her awake and still as someone bent over her rag-doll body, searched her pockets, yanked at her clothes, then kicked her in the hip before going.

She bided her time, listening to his subsiding steps, and slowly crawled across the road. Every move gave her a jolt of pain, and she stopped to pant into the dust. "There are only a few meters left," Masha told herself, "You scored ten out of twelve in PE last term, ten out of twelve." Her Granddad’s car shimmered in the distance. She could see him crouching beside it and waving at her desperately.

She pushed once more and wormed her way along. Leaving a scarlet trace behind her, gasping for air, Masha couldn’t help feeling a little bit sorry for the Russian soldier. Because all he fought for was her smartphone and silver cross. All she fought for was life.
11 Comments
Mimi Grouse
2/12/2022 01:55:17 pm

Such a powerful story.
Stay safe.

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David Milner
2/12/2022 06:02:29 pm

Chilling. But Masha's inner strength fills me with hope. Bless you, Malvina Perova.

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Krystyna
2/12/2022 08:58:51 pm

This grips the soul, Malvina. Masha’s story repeated countless times in a senseless war. Be safe and keep on writing.

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Don Tassone link
2/12/2022 09:10:59 pm

A ghastly snippet of the cruelty and depravity of this war. Well done, Malvina.

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Wendy A Markel
2/12/2022 10:32:35 pm

A powerful story, well told. Thank you

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Angela Carlton link
3/12/2022 02:33:38 am

A harsh look at reality with a beutiful voice that gives us strength.

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Ceri Marriott
3/12/2022 07:42:22 pm

Very powerful - cruelty and waste, and great inner strength

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Sue Clayton
5/12/2022 01:47:11 am

Your words cut deep.

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anthony covatta
5/12/2022 01:57:43 am

Glory to Ukraine and to all the brave Ukrainians. Thank you Malvina. A country woman of yours was at our house tonight for dinner. I told her of your struggles. Let us all carry on together, one way or another.

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Fliss Zakaszewska
9/12/2022 08:44:40 pm

Horrifying 'incident' but so well told. So glad you're safe.

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Cindy Patrick
25/12/2022 04:38:39 pm

Inspirational! The fight, the spirit, the words that come out of the chaos.
There is no better gift.

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