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History in the Making, by Sandra James

18/2/2021

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FOOD
Rushing to get through at least some of the long list of tasks I’d set myself for the day, I noticed a missed call message on my phone from my eldest son who lives with his nine-year-old son in the small town near our rural home.

My grandson Jackie answered when I called back.

‘Grandma, when are you going to bring me my chocolate cake?’

Damn! I’d forgotten I’d promised on the weekend that I’d bring him cake today on my way to the post office.

‘I just wanted to know what time because we have to go out for a little while,’ he continued.

‘What time are you going out?’

‘Sometime between twelve and two.’

Perfect, that gave me time to make some chocolate cupcakes, let them cool before I iced them, then drop them off on my way to the post office.

‘That’s great,’ I told him. ‘I was coming just after two o’clock.’ I crossed my fingers as I spoke, glad he couldn’t see me.

‘Cool. See you then.’ Never one to stand on ceremony, he hung up.

I knew the recipe by heart but reached for my old recipe book out of habit. Yellowed pages, stained with food-splash memories from goodness knows how many baking sessions over its forty years of service and a multitude of magazine clippings inside the cover.

Carefully turning the fragile pages, I read the headings - Date Loaf, Banana Cake, Plum Pudding and Coconut Cookies. I’m instantly transported back to my Nan’s tiny kitchen, the old gas stove in the corner, my special drinking glass in the dish drainer and the wooden stool my Pop made for me to stand on. I can smell the delicious aroma of her pumpkin scones, the ones I wouldn’t believe were made with pumpkin because at seven I hated pumpkin. But they were yellow, my favourite colour, and I tried them and they were delicious. Dad, Mum and my brother laughed but Nan showed me how to make them, and as an adult I love pumpkin and still make scones.

I recall the miniature cake tray, rolling pin and spoons I got for my sixth birthday. Mum never had time to let me use them, told me I’d make too much mess, but on school holidays Nan patiently helped me make tiny cakes and sat down to a picnic with my dolls afterwards.

I vow to make all the recipes in the book, relive all the memories again but today I’ll start with the chocolate cake, the recipe painstakingly written in my late brother’s juvenile handwriting. I hear his voice. ‘You have to make lots of chocolate cakes, Sis!’

Jackie loves chocolate cake and he often helps me in the kitchen. Perhaps one day, when he’s my age, his heart will beat a little faster when he remembers cooking with Grandma, and keep the tradition alive with his grandchildren.
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16 Comments
Mary Wallace
19/2/2021 02:38:01 am

This is just lovely Sandra.

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Sandra James
19/2/2021 10:56:08 am

Thanks, Mary! I was blessed with wonderful grandparents and I hope my grandchildren say the same about me when they're older.

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Jim link
19/2/2021 02:45:17 am

It seems as if she's definitely setting down a good foundation for history to repeat itself.
Nice
Jim

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Sandra James
19/2/2021 11:00:23 am

Thank you, Jim. My grandmothers (and grandfathers) were a huge influence on my early life. I do wish I could be a fly on a future wall and hear what my grandchildren say about me to their children :)

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Pamela Kennedy
19/2/2021 03:11:43 am

Soooo sweet!

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Sandra James
19/2/2021 11:04:18 am

Thanks Pamela!

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Padmini Krishnan
19/2/2021 03:12:52 am

This is such a beautiful story. Hope the grandson, Jackie, will keep the tradition alive.

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Sandra James
19/2/2021 11:08:42 am

Thank you, Padmini. I showed my grandson Jackie tonight and he was thrilled to see his name in print and I'm sure he will keep the tradition alive. I also told my granddaughter who just turned four on a video call (she lives interstate) about making the chocolate cakes and she's looking forward to visiting and helping me, too :)

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Sue Clayton
19/2/2021 03:20:43 am

One day we'll eat chocolate cake together, Sandra.

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Sandra James
19/2/2021 11:09:06 am

We will, Sue :)

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Susan F. Reid
19/2/2021 12:07:58 pm

Beautiful memories in your story.

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Sandra James
20/2/2021 07:19:54 am

Thanks, Susan! I actually got out my old recipe book again while I was writing it and was filled with nostalgia :)

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Peggy Gerber
19/2/2021 11:50:39 pm

Lovely story Sandra.

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Sandra James
20/2/2021 07:20:34 am

Thank you, Peggy!

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Candace Arthuria Williams
20/2/2021 05:50:33 pm

Hope this is not the last time Jackie sees his name in print. Maybe he can bake chocolate cupcakes as he writes his first novel. In keeping with tradition.

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Sandra James
20/2/2021 10:30:42 pm

It is wonderful to be a grandparent and watch a child grow, especially when you realise you might still be a special part of his (or her) life long into the future.
Jackie decided he would like to accompany me to our local open mike poetry night, tonight, and has written an acrostic poem to read. I would never have been that brave at nine years old!
Perhaps there will be a novel in the future, and there will definitely be many more chocolate cakes :)
Thanks, Candace!

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