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Maybe Tomorrow, by Doug Bartlett

4/9/2020

 
He sits at the table for quite some time sipping a cup of coffee while waiting patiently for Tamara. He thinks about how much he could do for her, even the feast he would provide for them both to share.

The waiter comes over. “Sir, is there anything else I can get you? We will be closing in fifteen minutes.”

“ No, I’m fine, thank you.”

The waiter feels sorry for him. Every night he comes in and waits for her but she never shows up. This has been going on for quite some time.

“Excuse me sir, but why do you continue to come here after all this time when she never shows up?”

“ Someday she may come to realize that she needs me and I’ll be here for her.”

Meanwhile, Tamara gets ready for bed. She picks up her journal on her nightstand and as she opens it she is reminded of her commitment to pray every evening before falling asleep.

“ Yes,” she thought.” I need to do that…….but not tonight, I’m too tired.”
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Jim link
4/9/2020 03:33:45 pm

Tomorrow is only a day away...
There's always tomorrow, until there isn't.
Jim

Doug
4/9/2020 04:55:27 pm

Thanks Jim. Yes we are not guaranteed of tomorrow. We need to make the best of today.

Chuck Anderson
4/9/2020 05:55:38 pm

I made that Someone wait a long time, but meeting up with Him was the best move I ever made.

Doug
4/9/2020 06:29:50 pm

Thanks for sharing that with ua Chuck.

Mike B
5/9/2020 07:19:12 pm

Me too Chuck!! I’d like to say, it’s never too late, but I’m afraid once you’ve taken your last breath, you’ve missed your opportunity...

Mike B
4/9/2020 06:51:12 pm

Great example Doug, never put off until tomorrow what can be done today. We’re
Not promised that we’ll have tomorrow...

Doug
4/9/2020 07:18:15 pm

I appreciate you sharing Mike.

Sue Clayton
5/9/2020 05:07:43 am

In the words of Scarlett O'Hara ... Poignant.

Doug
6/9/2020 05:50:29 pm

Thanks Sue

Mary Wallace
5/9/2020 05:57:15 pm

He's always ready to listen. Just talk, you don't need a special place or time. Nicely done Doug.

Mike B
5/9/2020 07:21:14 pm

Well said Mary...

Doug
6/9/2020 05:52:44 pm

Well said Mary. Thanks for commenting.


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