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Out of the Mouths of Babes, by Jim Bartlett

3/8/2019

 
Running Wolf raises his head over the top of the rock, peering down into the ravine, where two men are setting up camp along the Creek of the Bluebird. One, the tallest, is trying to start a fire, while the other cleans their kill, and most likely their supper, a small deer.

Little Owl edges up next to his father. “Grandfather says the white men are cunning, and will use their rifles to take our valley. Their kind will soon fill the land all the way to where the sun sets.”

Running Wolf smiles and tussles his son’s hair. “Though he is my father, and I would not say such before him, I fear Gray Hawk may have stayed in the smoke a moon too many. His mind and eyes have become like the morning fog that lays silent across our great valley.” He juts his chin down toward the men. “Just look at them. They show no respect to the deer’s spirit, throwing aside the bones and hide. They make no thanks to the spirit for providing their meal, keeping them alive for another rise of the sun. They use their rifles rather than fashion the deer’s string for bows.” He shakes his head. “When they come in tribes, rather than teepees made from the hide, they cut down the very trees that hold back the wind and provide for their prey, to build their shelters, leaving the hills barren. A dark ghost of a forest that once was.” He points to a spot just behind the men at the edge of the trees. “See there? They make trails everywhere they go, making it easy for the hungry bears or wolves to find them.”

“But Father, when Grandfather took me for the sweating, he said the Souls of the Spirits warned him of yellow-haired men with iron sticks of fire. And what of the village by the River Tatanka? They—“

Running Wolf puts a finger to Little Owl’s mouth, stopping him from saying any more. He had gone with the Elders to the village, and his son’s words send both a cold chill...and the sharp edge of doubt into his gut. “Grandfather must have been listening to the trickster spirit, Iktomi. There’s no need to fear these men, Little Owl. They will be gone with the first snow. And like my father, his father before him, and his father before him, we will have this land to ourselves once again. The Spirits will prevail. Let not Gray Hawk put needless worry into that head of yours.” He taps Little Owl on the nose and they crawl back from the rock, moving away from the ledge. “Let’s find our supper,” he says, as they head into the thicket.

Though Running Wolf’s eyes are down, searching for the trail of the rabbit that led them here, his son’s words continue to torment, and a single thought fills his head.

While we still can, Little Owl. While we still can.
Michael McCarthy
4/8/2019 05:52:51 pm

Timely and sober parable . Underlines how lack of respect for the environment and those who understand it may well doom us all. Thought provoking and great writing

Jim link
4/8/2019 06:41:06 pm

Thanks ever so much Michael for the read and the thoughtful comments. I really do appreciate them!
Take care
Jim

Mike B
4/8/2019 10:13:39 pm

The truth in your story still applies today.
Well written Jim...

Jim link
5/8/2019 04:32:22 am

Thanks Mike. Sadly you are right...
Take care
Jim

Mary Wallace
5/8/2019 09:08:26 am

There is very little of that time left...very well written Jim.

Jim link
5/8/2019 03:23:01 pm

I wish I could say your words were not true, Mary.
Thanks so much for the read and comments.
Take care
Jim

Doug
5/8/2019 07:56:37 pm

A well written,thought provoking and timeless story. Excellent.

Jim link
5/8/2019 10:44:45 pm

Thanks, Doug. I really appreciate you taking the time to read the story and even more so the kind words about it.

Take care
Jim


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