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Postings, by Jim Bartlett

20/3/2020

 
“Thanks. Should you reconsider, please give me a call.” Andy disconnects and leans back in his chair with a heavy sigh. The only ring on his phone since ten this morning and it went absolutely nowhere. He shakes his head, both frustrated and disgusted. The automation was only supposed to cut into his department’s sales by twenty or thirty percent, but it’s been more like eighty.

At least he still has a job. Two of his close friends lost their jobs when the robotics took over most of the assembly section.

With another shake of the head he flips his screen between Twitter, Instagram, and Facebook, only to see that the scumbag he’s been “arguing” with, “Red Rider2,” has posted yet another incendiary comment.

“Listen you socialist libtard, all your candidate will be doing with his communistic rhetoric is making this country into another Venezuela. Have you noticed how well THEIR economy is doing?”

Andy hisses under his breath. Libtard...he hates that label. Teeth grinding, he again leans back in his chair hoping, praying, that the phone will ring and tear him away from the building anger he feels inside. But it sits quiet and he finds his gaze wandering across to Clarissa Mallow, his favorite distraction.

With the phone to her ear, she stares at her screen, an intense focus reflecting that her department, like his, is undergoing a lot of change. And the stress is showing. The difference for her is that she’s the department’s director, and the pain of the losses of personnel hits closer to home, as she has not only had to make the tough decisions, but worse, be the bearer of bad news.

She’s about his age, maybe a year or two younger, and though her forehead is crunched, he can tell her skin is soft, her heart is big. She’s thin – probably likes to run or workout like him – and wears her brunette hair shoulder-length. He sighs wistfully – he’d love to ask her out, but knows she’s way out of his league. Even the little things, such as the Yale diploma that hangs from the wall of her cubicle, as compared to the Cal State Fullerton he sports, make the possibilities ever less likely.

Besides, as a director, she’s three levels up from him; he can hardly see her “slumming.”

He sighs again and turns back to his screen and types. “You know, you illiterate hillbilly, you really need to take that glowing red neck of yours right back to the 1950s where it belongs. In case you haven’t heard, there are a couple of other countries out there that have socialism.”

* * *

Clarissa sets her phone down – more bad news about layoffs – and, nearly in tears, looks to her screen as a new post pops up from that liberal loser, “Make-a-Left.” Illiterate hillbilly? Really? What a jerk! She slips up closer to the keyboard, her mind racing. This deserves a proper “reply.”
Marjan Sierhuis
20/3/2020 12:29:25 pm

Those two may have to find something more constructive to do with their time. Well done Jim.

Jim link
20/3/2020 03:04:15 pm

Thanks, Marjan.
I wish it was only these two...
Take care
Jim

Carol Garrasi
20/3/2020 03:22:33 pm

Nicely done. A modern parable for our times. Thanks for the momentary distraction. Really enjoyed it.

Jim link
20/3/2020 03:42:52 pm

Thanks, Carol.
A distraction, indeed. I think we're all ready for as many of those as possible right now.
Thanks for the read and comments
Jim

michael mccarthy
20/3/2020 04:44:09 pm

ok they´ll never get together, but they have a lot in common.
very timely and clever commentary on modern life and the threats faced, all served up with an underlying humour and a great twist.
great stuff Jim

Jim link
20/3/2020 04:49:59 pm

Common, for sure.
Maybe we'll not only get through this virus thing, but also get over our divisive anger at some point.
One can dream.
Thanks for the read and comments, Michael!!
Jim

Mary Wallace
20/3/2020 04:56:10 pm

Well done Jim. I hope he never finds out.

Jim link
20/3/2020 05:25:22 pm

Thanks, Mary
Now that you mention it, I guess I hope he never finds out, too.

Take care
Stay well!
Jim

Mike B.
20/3/2020 06:50:19 pm

Good story Jim, I enjoyed it!!! Funny how 2 people can have so much in common, yet share some opposite opinions as well. Sad to me that many people can’t accept each other’s right to their own opinions.

Jim link
20/3/2020 07:57:52 pm

So true, Mike.
Thanks ever so much for the read and comments.
Take care
Jim

Kathy Slats
22/3/2020 06:39:49 pm

Hi Jimbo, Enjoyed this one. So relevant to today’s atmosphere. Please tell me what her “proper reply” would have been, or should I fill in the blanks? 😂

Jim link
22/3/2020 09:41:15 pm

Thanks, Kathy. I'm going to leave that "proper reply" to your imagination, but I'm pretty sure one or two of those seven words George Carlin used to joke about might be involved...

Thanks
Jim

Heidi
11/4/2020 07:38:38 pm

Love this!

Jim link
11/4/2020 10:25:39 pm

Thanks Heidi! I love that you took a moment to comment!!
Be safe and stay healthy!

Thanks
Jim


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