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Spaghetti Soup, by Phyllis Souza

4/9/2020

 
Mable scooped up a tablespoon of shortening and dropped it into the frying pan. She turned on the burner and adjusted the fire. She added onion and garlic and swirled until browned. Next, tomato sauce and Italian seasoning. While pouring in red wine, she sang to the food. Mable felt happy—she poured in some more.

The sound of bubbling gravy and the aroma of the mixture coming together was comforting.

Mable brought a wooden spoon filled with the gravy to her mouth. She inhaled, she blew, she tasted.

"Delicious," she said and put down the spoon.

For a couple of hours, the spaghetti sauce simmered over a low blue flame.

***

No Parmesan Cheese.

Mable left the house to go to the grocery store.

One hour later she walked into the kitchen. Surprise— her husband was home early from work. Fritz was sitting at the table, an empty bowl in front of him.

He smacked his lips. "That was great soup!"
Krystyna
4/9/2020 07:04:35 pm

Love your story, Phyllis. I can relate.
As to wine in the sauce, that’s how one of my cousins in Germany makes his pizza sauce, along with a wineglass in hand.

Phyllis Souuza
4/9/2020 08:03:09 pm

Krystyna, Thank you for your kind comment. Red wine in spaghettie is great. Adds flavor!

Sue Clayton
5/9/2020 04:54:54 am

Hope she had a spoon heavy enough to give him a good whack. Mouth-wateringly good, Phyllis.

Phyllis Souza
5/9/2020 05:48:24 pm

A big wooden spoon wouldn't bring back dinner, but might teach him good lesson. Thanks for reading.

Swapan k Banerjee
5/9/2020 09:18:38 am

Luscious and lip-smacking, Phyllis. You show and don't tell. That's real art of story-telling ...

Phyllis Souza
5/9/2020 05:51:54 pm

Swapan, Thanks for you kind comments. I think I'm getting hungry.

Mary Wallace
5/9/2020 05:46:46 pm

Lovely story. It sounds like something my husband would do.

Phyllis Souza
5/9/2020 07:06:53 pm

Yes, maybe a hungry man would take your wonderful sauce and slurp it as he were having a nice cup of soup.


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