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Sphere of Influence, by Don Tassone

23/5/2025

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Matt Spence stood in his front yard and watched the flames come closer, devouring everything in their path. The world was on fire, and there was nothing Matt or anyone could do to put it out.

Would his home too be consumed and he and his family with it?  Could anyone save them from this conflagration? Was there still time to flee?

Then Matt had an idea.  He got out his ladder and climbed up on his roof. He called to his wife to grab the garden hose, swing the nozzle end up to him and turn on the water, full blast.

Once she’d done that, Matt began spraying everything within reach: his yard, his house, parts of his next door neighbors’ yards.

His neighbors saw what Matt was doing and decided to climb up on their roofs and begin spraying too.  Then their neighbors did the same. Soon the whole neighborhood looked like a fountain.  The fire ravaged dry areas but left the wet ones alone.

Word spread to other communities all across the country.  With their hoses, everyone drenched everything they could and staved off the fire.  It still found plenty of fuel. But amidst the flames, the people had found a way to save themselves and one another.
10 Comments
peppermint
23/5/2025 12:33:38 pm

Yes! We can do something if we unite for a cause. Fine reminder, Don. Keep having a terrific trip!

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Kathy K.
23/5/2025 03:06:31 pm

We have amazing strength when we pull together. But someone has to take the first step.

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Jim Bartlett link
23/5/2025 04:46:04 pm

Sometimes folks don't even know they have a garden hose, much less feel it will help. It's when everyone joins together that the flames can be held in check,
Sadly, there are (and will continue to be) others who are, on the other side, throwing gasoline on that fire.
Nicely done, Don
Jim

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Krystyna
23/5/2025 06:10:36 pm

Amid such a terrifying experience, resilience and hope prevails. Admirably told, Don.

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Dee Lorraine
23/5/2025 06:35:33 pm

We need more Matts and hoses!

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Cheryl Dahlstrand
23/5/2025 06:57:07 pm

Initially, this story appeared to be about Altadena, however, "the world" turned it into a real-unreal analogy. Both discouraging and encouraging in its way.

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Tom Baldwin
24/5/2025 06:12:18 am

Well done, Don. By the right actions we can protect ourselves, and by banding together we can achieve so much more.

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Don Tassone link
24/5/2025 07:09:34 am

Thank you all for your thoughtful comments.

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Libby Belle link
24/5/2025 03:05:13 pm

It's like they say, "I'd rather die trying." Nice story, Don. Your message is loud and clear.

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Don Tassone link
24/5/2025 07:06:31 pm

Thank you, Libby.

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