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Suzy Q, by Angela Carlton

15/10/2021

 
I used to call you Suzy Q. You with your silky brown hair and eyes to match. We were silly teens with endless energy, those colorful dreams. Man, could we dream? Barefoot at the pool or riding around with the sunroof back and the radio at full volume. We were fearless, happy, and bold, living, with our eyes open wide. No regrets.

Then I moved away. Time passed us by, didn’t it? There were some disagreements over the years quite a few tears. We grew apart. November turned into June and June turned into December. The snow fell hard, fast and everything iced over.

But Spring always comes, doesn’t it?
I’ll roll the sunroof back and switch on the radio. There are days, when “Brown Eyed Girl,” will play, and I see you. I can see you standing beneath the Georgia Moon with the cherry balm, cut-off shorts, those braids in your hair.
I smile.

For, in that moment, we are twenty again, Suzy Q.
And we are free.
Jim B. link
15/10/2021 04:40:57 pm

This really is so well done, Angela. Loved the seasonal change (as is with life) and the musical pull back to thoughts of his Suzy-Q. There's a lot unsaid here as well, and I could easily see this as a much longer tale.
Loved that ending - but it makes you wonder. And we are free.
Nicely done
Jim

Doug
15/10/2021 05:15:56 pm

Very nicely done. I don't think anyone could read this without bringing back their own pleasant memories. I know I couldn't. Thank you.

Angela Carlton link
15/10/2021 05:43:26 pm

Thank you guys, for your insight and great review!!

Pamela Kennedy
15/10/2021 11:39:37 pm

Such a charming story...it made me smile.

Natalie
16/10/2021 03:08:05 pm

So beautifully written, Angela. Totally agree with all reviews above- I can surely relate and see myself self in this, as well♥️ The “Cherry balm”,” Georgia Moon”…just love it and where it took me away for a moment.

Cat Albanys
18/10/2021 12:01:31 am

Love this!

Sue Clayton
19/10/2021 01:28:47 am

Many of my friends call me Suzy Q and even thought I'm in the winter years of my life I still feel the warmth of summer sun and a spring in my step when they say my name.


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