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Thanksgiving Turkey, by Phyllis Souza

18/11/2022

 
It's an early Thanksgiving morning.
Annie is watching Del, her mother, prepare a twenty-two-pound turnkey.
Del takes a handful of torn day-old bread, mixed with sautéed celery and onions, bits of giblets, and lots of sage. She packs it into the bird.
"Why are you doing that?" Annie rubs her sleepy brown eyes.
Del turns to Annie and smiles. "Because it's delicious." After filling the turkey, she takes the golden heel from a loaf of Wonder bread and seals it.
Through tangles of long curly hair, Annie scratches her scalp. "Why are you doing that?"
"So, the stuffing won't fall out." Del rinses her hands under the faucet and picks up a poultry needle.
Annie frowns. "Why are you doing that?"
"To keep the skin together." Del drives in the sharp point and draws the string.
"You're hurting it!"
"The turkey is dead," Del tells Annie. "It can't feel."
"It's not dead.” Annie, tugs on her mother's arm. “Stop it.”
"Be a good girl and let me finish." Del sews and snips. "There. Done."
Annie gives her mother a glare as only a three-year-old can. She stands there staring at the turkey, shoulders slumped, and tears rolling down her cheek, "Poor turkey," she cries. "Poor. Poor Turkey."
Jim Bartlett link
18/11/2022 04:33:23 pm

Though some fifteen-year-olds have a pretty well practiced glare, I love the "only as a three-year-old can."
Poor turkey - and poor Del. Sounds like she's going to be up against a sharp little Annie as she grows up.
Jim

phyllis souza
19/11/2022 02:58:21 am

Thanks Jim. Always appreciate your comments! Phyllis

Don Tassone link
18/11/2022 11:54:51 pm

Tradition with a side of reality. Thank you, Phyllis.

phyllis souza
19/11/2022 03:05:52 am

You're welcome, Don. I wanted to write about the experience of a small child at Thanksgiving. I remember watching my own mother stuff a turkey. Phyllis

Doug Bartlett
19/11/2022 02:16:44 am

I felt like I was in the kitchen with them. Great job.

Phyllis Souza
19/11/2022 03:08:12 am

Maybe you were in the kitchen with Annie, if only for a minute. Phyllis

Sue Clayton
19/11/2022 06:29:53 am

As the family are thankful for Del's turkey, there won't be many thanks coming from Annie. Bet she won't even sit at the table.

phyllis souza
19/11/2022 06:58:50 pm

Bet she won't eat any turkey. Thank you for the comment. Phyllis


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