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The Ash from the Paper, by Angela Carlton

15/7/2022

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Did you actually think you could escape?

Shelly sits back behind the table of lit candles, all the ash from the paper she had burned with his name scribbled on it. Not just any name, but the name of her boss who was involved with that petite, “nothing of a girl.” They called her his wife, but not for long.

Shelly was a “witch” and had earned that title long ago. When she was younger, she spent her days with teens who practiced witchcraft in the cemetery rather than going to the local mall. She wore black make-up, black clothes, and mini skirts with fishnet stockings, daily, regardless of the weather.

Later, she traded her short skirts for black dresses, long stockings and proudly displayed choker necklaces, onyx rings, and bracelets, the jewelry, made from the delicate hands of her boss, Luke. When she sees him working his magic, it reminds her of the days before with that boy. The boy who worked with metal in his Dad’s garage. The one who created the large metal moon for her bedroom wall and a dagger to ward off spirits in the cemetery, the boy who accidentally slipped down a cliff in the thick lightning storm, never to return.

Now, she mixes the ingredients for the love spell: violet, hawthorn, pearl dust, and honey-infused rose buds. She blends it together, shaking it two to four times before she lets it sit in that dark, cool space for weeks.

When that Tuesday comes, the very day of the super moon, she moves carefully with the potion inside the pocket of her black vest. She walks with ease through the jewelry store without blinking before she drops a dose into Luke’s afternoon coffee.

She waits, the witch waits-waits-waits for him to slip, stumble, fall.

Oh, yes, this man will fall.
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6 Comments
Doug
15/7/2022 04:30:27 pm

Quite an ominous story Angela.

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Angela Carlton link
15/7/2022 09:23:25 pm

Yes, I am working on a project involving modern day fairy tales and the witch is usually the most wicked!

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Natalie
15/7/2022 10:13:33 pm

The song “witchy woman” comes to
mind! Wow…fascinating story.

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Ashley
16/7/2022 02:29:26 am

Good story! Strong wicked Witch character.

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Sue Clayton
16/7/2022 06:09:21 am

I've written down the love spell recipe. Just got to decide who will be the one to fall at my feet.

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Jim Bartlett link
17/7/2022 04:04:17 pm

I had to read through this a second time, yet I still feel there's a deeper story hidden within. I really like the waits-waits-waits line.
And fall he will...
Nicely done - fun story
Jim

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