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The Bucket, by Jim Bartlett

19/10/2018

 
The young boy dips the ladle into the bucket, taking a deep draw. He stares into the liquid for a moment, watching it glisten in the sun, then pours it along the garden’s edge, letting his laugh flow into the soft breeze.

“You need to be more careful with that,” his father warns. “What will you do when the bucket is empty?”

“But it’s such a big bucket. There’ll always be plenty. Besides, can’t we just get more?”

He scoops again, but this time his father wraps a hand around his wrist. His grip is soft but firm, and he gently looks into his son’s eyes, letting his smile light them with the glow of knowledge and love.

“The bucket can never be refilled, my son. We need every drop to nourish our souls, to build our lives, to grow our love. Use it wisely, use it slowly. During the course of our lives, especially when we are young, we all toss some to the wind in folly. As long as there are hearts filled with laughter and smiles and memories to long cherish, it’s never a waste. But always remember, once it is gone, it is gone.”

His father turns the boy’s hand, guiding him to empty the ladle back into the bucket. He then lets his hand go and kneels down, carefully rubbing the mud off the outside of the bucket, exposing a small placard, its tattered edges folding over.

It reads:
TIME
Cinda Price link
20/10/2018 01:10:35 am

Great story!!!

Jim
20/10/2018 02:58:09 am

Thanks Cinda! Appreciate the read and more so the comments!!
Take care
Jim

Carol Garrasi
20/10/2018 11:31:58 am

Just a tad too long to embroider on a pillow. The visuals you paint would put Michelangelo to shame. Great job. Another winner.

Jim
20/10/2018 04:05:40 pm

You're too kind, Carol. Thanks so much for the read and the nice comments.

Doug B.
21/10/2018 01:03:19 am

Ah yes, youth is wasted on the young. Great job!!!

Jim
21/10/2018 01:09:54 am

Thanks Doug! Much appreciated!

Michael McCarthy link
27/10/2018 02:32:35 pm

First class flash Jim, beautifully descriptive with a lovely heartfelt message

Jim
27/10/2018 04:07:06 pm

Thanks ever so much, Mike. Really appreciate the read and the comments!
Jim

Sarah Blum
5/11/2018 03:03:15 am

Wow Jim, Another great one. Gives me chills.

Jim
5/11/2018 03:54:38 am

Thanks so much, Sarah!!
Jim

Maryanne Boyd
10/11/2018 07:40:34 pm

Jim,
I loved this one...I wish I would have savored time as much when I was young as I do now!
Maryanne

Jim
10/11/2018 07:48:34 pm

Ain't it the truth, Maryanne! But, when we are young the time is of no consequence, the bucket seems to be overflowing! Only when we see things are of limited resource do we begin to appreciate its worth. Thanks a million for the read and the comments!
Jim


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