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The Golden Aspen, by Deborah Shrimplin

28/1/2022

 
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The bluejay in the pine tree saw her do it. Three-year-old Grace wandered away from the family picnic site and followed a well-worn path through the woods. Delighting in the colors, sounds and smells of the primordial forest, Grace walked along the trail until she came to a shallow stream.

On a rock along the edge of the stream, Grace saw the bluejay return her gaze. Across the stream, a door hung between two slender pines. The door was marked with three arrows pointing up and a tear shaped engraving under each arrow.

Being a curious child, Grace crossed the stream. She didn't like the feel of water in her shoes, took them off and placed them next to the door. As the bluejay flew over the door, Grace heard the fluttering of its wings.

Grace pushed the door open, stepped over the threshold and marveled at the sight of a single golden aspen tree. The bluejay was perched on a branch next to a delicate nest. Grace floated toward the tree. The door vanished.

A few days later, a search party found Grace's white shoes with two tear shaped rocks embellished with the words "We will never forget".

Circling above the scene, the bluejay saw Grace's mother take one shoe and one tear drop stone. Then, she said to her husband, "We'll leave one of each here in remembrance of Grace and all the children never found."

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P.S. Nolf
28/1/2022 11:04:39 pm

Ah, this is one of those stories you need to read carefully. If you skim over it, you could assume that the story is one of those missing kids who have been abducted. But if you read closer, Grace is enticed by the magic of the woods. She ends up floating toward the golden aspen--what has she been transformed into. This a reworking of the fairy mound stories where humans are enticed by music into the dances and celebrations of the wee folks. The mother leaves the shoes so when Grace returns in fifty years she knows her way home.
Of course there is enough lyricism and symbolism that one can interpret this story in many ways.

Sue Clayton
29/1/2022 02:18:52 am

I felt tears rise as I first looked at the picture then I read P.S.'s comment and thought, yes this could be a tale worthy of Narnia.


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