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The Great Indoors, by Mandy Meikle

8/10/2021

 
Microbes are not smart. Microbes do not plot and plan, wheel and deal, they simply do what they must to survive. Through centuries of what was called 'progress', some humans did their best to control nature but they could not dominate the microbial domain. Microbes were everywhere; they were myriad. Eventually, these humans became hermetically sealed in their sterile apartments, connected to various places by vacuum tube, and eventually they forgot about death and disease. These digital humans existed logged into their world of carefully balanced work, rest and play, with drones delivering their needs and wants so long as they could pay for it. Drugs in the scrubbed air and the filtered water meant that people felt great. Monitored 24/7 but safe from nature—safe and content in the great indoors.

Life outside sounded like hell to digital humans—all that back-breaking work to provide just the basics and all that uncertainty. Digital humans had no clue where anything came from, not the food they ate, the clothes they wore nor the ideas they held as their own. Meanwhile, over the decades, life on the outside improved. Slowly. Sustainably. Free from the delusion of perpetual growth-based economics.

Although few of them realised it, the digital humans were still totally reliant on nature: the corn and bean basis of their false-food diet, the reusable bio-plastic trays of their heat-and-eat 'food', the vibrant fabrics of their clothes. An engineer might occasionally fix a self-driving tractor but he had no idea what it was doing driving up and down in the dirt, putting things into or taking things out of the ground. All production was automated now—even reproduction.

As resource limits were inevitably reached, the digital cities faltered and chaos ensued within, while to the outside world they remained what they had always been: impenetrable fortresses—monolith on the outside and monoculture within. The digital humans had to remain inside, despite services failing, because they could never go outside again. Their immune systems, along with everything else, had been provided for them.

The neo-indigenous populations—the germ-laden 'outsiders'—had not tried to dominate nature, they had worked with it. They understood the concept of 'enough', the difference between wants and needs. The hubris of civilisation had run its course. Death was just the other end of life once more. Death was not bad, it just was.

It was bound to happen one day, the only question was who would be around to see it. When the sun emitted the most massive coronal mass ejection in its history—one which would have decimated all electrical devices and destroyed the digital cities anyway—humanity carried on unchanged. If the distant lights of the cities had not gone out long ago, they would have gone out on this night. This night of the most spectacular auroras, seen from pole to equator, as a tsunami of charged particles washed over a small blue planet. ​
Greg Vander-Haeghen
9/10/2021 08:45:45 am

"Hermetically sealed," you're spot on with this piece. Great bit of writing.

Mandy Meikle link
9/10/2021 05:55:07 pm

Thanks Greg. I'm kinda obsessed with why people don't realise that we're not above nature, but part of it!

Greg Vander-Haeghen
9/10/2021 06:47:04 pm

Mandy, you've inspired me to write something more meaningful than the nonsense I've been writing. I'm gonna get back into writing Sci Fi because the future is here already. Thanks.

Mandy Meikle link
4/11/2021 11:44:02 am

Hi Greg - just noticed this from you and am delighted to have inspired someone! Good luck with it!

Sue Clayton
10/10/2021 03:17:43 am

This was incredible, Mandy. Puts me in mind of a TV program many years ago titled The Machine Stops. Humans lived in a dome controlled by a machine, then the machine stopped working and humanity died.

Mandy Meikle
4/11/2021 11:45:38 am

Hi Sue - just noticed this and don't know the programme but many thanks for mentioning it. I always feel that nothing I say will be new, but then again I can't believe we haven't got our sapiens act together yet!


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