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The Lighthouse, by Doug Bartlett

11/11/2022

 
Here I sit at our local town hall meeting waiting for my turn to voice my opinion on why we should not get rid of our local lighthouse. It seems I’m the only dissenter in this ocean of people who want to tear down a piece of our history and put up a mountain of condominiums on that spot.

I realize the larger ships have changed their routes and no longer sail by here. Yet at the same time I’ll never forget the day that lighthouse saved my life.

I was out sailing that day and had taken what I thought was a short nap. I woke to the sound of thunder. Storm clouds were rolling in and it was quickly getting dark. The sea was churning and began to toss my diminutive boat to and fro. I needed to get to shore quickly but there was only a small window of opportunity to come ashore on a sandy beach as the area was strewn with large,craggy rocks. There was no way I would be able to safely find my way ashore and the darker it got the greater the odds grew that I would not find safe haven. My anxiety level plummeted when that solitary light from the lighthouse pierced the darkness and gave me a perfect path to guide me safely home.
Gregory Hanger
11/11/2022 12:27:26 pm

Why do we seek to tear down that which saves us?

Doug
11/11/2022 03:56:04 pm

Good question Gregory. You might need to ask a psychiatrist that one.

Angela Carlton link
11/11/2022 01:49:27 pm

The light that shines us through the storm and a great metaphor for life!

Doug
11/11/2022 03:57:43 pm

You're so right Angela. Thank you.

Dee Lorraine
11/11/2022 05:05:43 pm

I too am grateful for that "solitary light from the lighthouse [that] pierced the darkness and gave me a perfect path to guide me safely home." Thanks for a beautiful story, Doug.

Doug
11/11/2022 10:32:16 pm

Thank you Dee for that wonderful moment.

Jim Bartlett link
11/11/2022 05:10:02 pm

Every now and then we need a guiding light.
Though for some, that comes from the glitter of gold
Nicely done
Jim

Doug
11/11/2022 10:33:38 pm

Thank you Jim. I appreciate it.

Michael Borjon
11/11/2022 06:49:05 pm

Great Story Doug!!
In this dark world that we all live in, I am so thankful that I have an indestructible lighthouse that provides a guiding light for my life..,

Doug
11/11/2022 10:34:30 pm

Thanks Mike.

Marjan Sierhuis
11/11/2022 07:13:55 pm

As technology has advanced lighthouses are no longer used as navigational aids. And some countries find it too expensive to maintain the site. Interesting story, Doug.

Doug
11/11/2022 10:35:55 pm

Thank you Marjan. I'm glad you found it interesting.

Sue Clayton
13/11/2022 12:49:08 am

Just finished watching a UK documentary on lighthouses. After years of saving lives, these beacons deserve to have their own lives preserved.

Doug
13/11/2022 05:47:39 am

Good point Sue. Thanks.

Chuck
13/11/2022 11:01:35 pm

I wish I had seen that Light earlier,

Doug
14/11/2022 12:52:47 am

Thanks for your comment Chuck.


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