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The Partner, by Jim Bartlett

14/6/2019

 
Dragging his carry-on suitcase behind him, Carl wearily pushes through the door. After three connections and a delayed flight, he’s finally home.

Wiping his brow, he looks up to see Marci, their “babysitter,” lost in a book sitting in the recliner. She’s brought back to the real world only when he clears his throat.

“Oh, Mr. G! You’re home. Mrs. G said you’d probably be late. She had to go to work.”

“Yeah, the wonderful world of flying. How’s Mark?”

“You know, other than grumbling about me having to be here, he’s lost in that video game, Dark Fantasy.”

Carl smiles. “Something about being 12 makes you think you’re ready for the world.” He reaches into his pants pocket and pulls out his wallet.

“No need, Mr. G, Mrs. G paid already.”

He nods, but yet pulls out a 10. “Here, a little extra for all you do...and puttin’ up with a 12-year-old’s attitude.”

She laughs and takes the bill with a thanks. Tossing her book in her pack, she starts for the entry.
“You need a ride or anything?”

“Nope, but thanks. Got my dad’s car.” She flashes another quick smile and waves, then slides through the door.

Carl moves over to the front window, keeping an eye until she’s safe in the car and on her way. Loosening his tie, he heads up the stairs, giving a light tap on Mark’s door before stepping in.

“Oh, hey, Dad. Didn’t know you were back.”

“Just got in. How’s Mom?”

“Good. Think she had to work or somethin’.”

“So I heard.” Carl juts his chin in the direction of the curtained window. “You know, there’s this bright thing called the sun out there calling for you. We could go out and toss a ball or something. Supposed to be nice tomorrow again and I’m off...maybe we could go fishin’?”

“Thanks, Dad. Maybe some other time. I just got to Level 16, Shadowland.” He takes a deep sigh.
​
“But I’m kinda stuck. My partner has been off line since last night, and you really need to team up for this next demon.”

“Partner?”

“Yeah. T-Rex44. He’s really a cool dude. We’ve been kickin’ as...uh, butt together since Level 5.”

“A cool dude, eh?” He smiles and shakes his head. “Okay, well I’m gonna get these stinkin’ work clothes off and kick back for a bit. I’ll come get you for dinner later.”

“Can’t we just order a pizza?”

Carl gives his head another shake. “Okay, sounds good.”

He heads down the hall, tucking into the master bedroom, twisting the lock on the door as he closes it behind him. He tosses his suit jacket and tie on the bed, then slips into the “sitting nook,” a little alcove in the large room. He sits at the desk, jet lag taking its toll, and fires up the PC.

A beep tells him the PC is alive, and clicks on the application. 
 
DARK FANTASY
LOGIN:

He types: T-REX44
Marjan Sierhuis
15/6/2019 03:04:04 pm

Jim. Love your surprise ending.
Well done.

Jim link
15/6/2019 04:08:29 pm

Thanks ever so much, Marjan! Appreciate the read and even more so the nice comment!
Thanks
Jim

Michael McCarthy
15/6/2019 06:45:07 pm

This is such a good story, the mood is set for...I had absolutely no idea! Which of course makes you read! Great characters, especially of course, dad. Great stuff Jim. Mike

Jim link
16/6/2019 01:21:36 am

Thanks Mike! Really appreciate the read and the nice comments!
Take care
Jim

Mike B
16/6/2019 05:05:54 am

More than one way to interact with your kid, can't wait to read the rest of the story when Mark finds out his partner's true identity. Great story!!!
Happy Father's Day Jim!!!

Jim link
16/6/2019 05:45:28 am

And a Happy Father's Day to you, Mike! Appreciate the read and the nice comments!
Take care
Jim


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