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The Spirit at Night, by Angela Carlton

23/2/2023

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I can hear the spirit at night, your voice, before I drift away to sleep. “You must stop practicing black magic. You must relent and let go Eva.” I tend to pace the floor after these encounters wondering, searching, and trying to recall the fond memories of you, my late mother.

“Walk away from casting spells. Stop the witchcraft!,” the voice roars on later in my dream, as I sit up with a sweaty feeling and head to the kitchen for a tall glass of water.

In a box tucked away in a closet, I fumble around until I find my old baby book. I flip through pages until I find a birth announcement, grade school news, and birthday parties. I look at a selection of photos, me and you posing, smiling and happy in front of the camera. We were happy. I can see that we were happy.

In the back of the book, I noticed a letter tucked behind an envelope. It was stuffed behind a cream envelope, this, a surprise.

Dear Eva,

If you are reading this letter I hope I am safe. I hope I have found a way to sever my relationship with your father. I did not realize he was a warlock and dabbled in voodoo. I did not realize he was abusive and controlling. I hope as you read between the lines you will find that I was able to escape and we both are free.

Love,

Mother
6 Comments
Ashley Smallwood
24/2/2023 03:45:00 am

Wow this is really interesting and touching! It makes you want to read more. It's amazing how spirits can be helpful in some cases, even in real life. Keep up the good work!

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Angela Carlton link
24/2/2023 03:54:33 am

Yes, sometimes" in dreams" we can find the answers.

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Natalie
24/2/2023 02:23:58 pm

What a deep hidden secret and what a way to discover! Great story and as always love nostalgic vibes!

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Johnny Carlton
24/2/2023 11:28:07 pm

Kinda reminds me of Nanny Cartoon!

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Brook
25/2/2023 04:20:47 pm

Dreams can be revealing if you remember them. I’m glad Eva found the solution in a letter. It is hard not knowing the truth. I think you set you set up the ending well. Letters can solve puzzles from the past. Too bad we won’t have letters for the next generation.

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Jim Bartlett link
25/2/2023 05:39:03 pm

Read between the lines - perfect for what is happening here.
Another makes us wonder story, Angela.
That seems to be your "magic" as of late, casting a story spell upon us.
Jim

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