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The Stupid Gift, by Peggy Gerber

19/2/2021

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Alexis groaned as she read her mother’s text, “You didn’t thank your father for the birthday gift. He’s really hurt. Please give him a buzz, and when you speak to him don’t call him Frankie. He hates that.”

Alexis kicked the wall. Her mother seemed to keep forgetting that Frankie was her step-father, not her father and what kind of stupid gift was a family trip to Hershey Park anyway? She was eighteen years old and in college, for heaven’s sake and he was giving her a gift for a ten-year old. She wondered if he picked this gift because her half-sister was still little, and he was really just thinking about her.

Alexis rolled her eyes and picked up the phone to call her step-dad. When he answered she said, “Hi Frankie, thanks for the thoughtful birthday gift.”

Her step-dad bubbled, “I’m so glad you like it. I want you to know I put a lot of thought into what to get you for your special birthday Alexis. Do you remember that first trip we took to Hershey Park when you were eight years old? Mom and I had just gotten married and we wanted to do something special for you. Remember our tour of the chocolate factory when you got a mound of gooey chocolate stuck in your hair? We were all really laughing.”

Alexis sighed, “Sure Frankie, I remember. It was fun.”

“Yes, “He said, “ It was fun, but it was more than that for me. It was on that trip that I really got to know you and I began to feel like your dad for the first time. I gave you this gift because it is the tenth anniversary of when I fell in love with you, and I wanted to recreate, if just for a bit, that special vacation.” He added, “Sweetheart, I hope you know how much I love you and how proud I am to be your dad.”

Alexis began to cry. “I love you too Daddy. This is the best gift ever. I can’t wait to go.”
11 Comments
Pamela Kennedy
19/2/2021 05:31:57 pm

Such a sweet, lovely story!

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Jim link
19/2/2021 05:55:43 pm

Lovely, Peggy. I love Alexis' turnaround at the end.
Nicely done
Jim

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Nicole
19/2/2021 07:52:39 pm

Awwww. Alexis sounds like a classic teenager- who is lucky to have Frankie. I love the transition in names, from the initial warning from her mother not to call him Frankie, to her intentional choice of using his name, to the release and transition to daddy. What a special gift

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yehudis shaps
19/2/2021 09:06:00 pm

Great story. It shows the importance of communication. If Frankie just expected her to love it without explaining it, so much would have been lost.

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Sue Clayton
20/2/2021 01:42:54 am

She couldn't have a sweeter dad, step or otherwise.

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Sandra James
20/2/2021 07:17:53 am

Oh, Peggy! It's a hot day here in Australia but I got goosebumps reading your story, and now my eyes are VERY misty :) Beautiful!

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Susan F. Reid
20/2/2021 02:04:57 pm

Peggy, it's nice to read a heartwarming story.

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Peggy Gerber
20/2/2021 02:40:48 pm

Thank you so much everyone for those beautiful comments. I appreciate them so very much.

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Candace Arthuria Williams
20/2/2021 05:39:59 pm

A virtual gamut of emotions, from annoyance to understanding, and eventually to tears. Loved it, Peggy. Well done.

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Ruth Viera
21/2/2021 03:10:59 am

An unexpected ending. Moving.

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Marie Johnson-Ladson
22/2/2021 10:12:47 pm

Great story, she was reminded her step-father really loved her.

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