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The Touch of a Stranger, by Mary Wallace

15/1/2021

 
There was a faint lightening of the sky signalling the end of night, but not of nightmares. Sunrise did little to disturb the grey clouds or the fingers of mist that unfurled over the now silent battlefield.The snow, once white, held a pink tinge not painted by any dawn.
Bodies, clad in uniforms both green and black, having bled their life essence to colour their surroundings, lay still, stiffening in the snow. Frank, wounded but not yet dead, could picture the carnage. It was the silence that he felt the most. The guns finally quietened; the softly falling snow deadening the sound of footsteps. Frank lay still, knowing he would soon be among the dead.
He was unable to turn his head to see his nearest neighbour, so he lay not knowing if he would die with friend or foe. It didn’t matter. They were all men of honour; young men filled with the adrenaline of youth, their signatures given in a wave of patriotism.
Frank chose not to call out to those silent footsteps. He was too wounded to last as a prisoner and he had no desire to feel a bayonet in his chest. He was tired, but he was not in pain although he could recall the machine gun bullets entering his legs. Frank lay as if dead. If the enemy found him, there would be pain; If his comrades found him he would be a patient for months, and a burden for life. The bayonet would be the quicker choice.
His hand slowly inched towards a vestige of warmth, whoever lay beside him was not yet dead. Their fingers locked and lay still. Perhaps it was an enemy who would share his final moments. Visions of two bicycle riders struggling through bombed out streets, to deliver death notices floated through his mind. Would their parents open the telegrams with stoicism, having expected the news each day since they had enlisted, or would grief and despair rise from both sides of the channel? He wished he could tell them that their sons weren’t alone at the end. That they had comforted each other.
The strangers fingers relaxed their grip, taking the last vestige of warmth and leaving Frank bereft. He closed his eyes once more against the pink glow. Images of childhood and the touch of a stranger, were enough to lead him gently to the other side.
Pamela Kennedy
16/1/2021 03:17:57 am

What a truly wonderful story, Mary. I was touched by that soldier as well.

Sue Clayton
16/1/2021 03:26:24 am

Didn't matter which side they were from they were brothers in arms right to the end. This is such a beautiful, sensitively written story, Mary. Truly a masterpiece.

Swapan k Banerjee
18/1/2021 05:20:34 pm

Heart-wrenching Mary. Your prose as always is of the first water.

Mary Wallace
18/1/2021 09:17:48 pm

Thank you Pamela, Sue and Swapan for reading and taking the time to comment.

Jim link
19/1/2021 04:55:24 am

I somehow missed this Mary. But I am so glad I found it! What a wonderful painting of words you have here. It matters not which side this soldier (or the one beside him) have chosen, war has no winners.
This is lovely, and so sad at the same time.

Thanks
Jim

Mary Wallace
19/1/2021 02:04:12 pm

Thank you for your lovely comment Jim; I'm glad you found it too.


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