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The Year of the Locusts, by Don Tassone

13/6/2025

 
Thousands of worker ants fanned out across the forest floor to find food, leaves and twigs. In an orderly fashion, they then bore them back to their home and queen.

It took them months, but they laid up supplies enough to nourish and protect every member of the colony through the long winter.

But this year an enemy was watching: a swarm of ravenous locusts. Perched in the trees, they saw the ants as easy prey, in part because they knew they would do anything, even sacrifice themselves, to protect the colony.

“How foolish they are,” said the locust king. “They could leave the weak behind and run for cover. But they risk their lives to save others. They’ll make a good meal.”

The following morning, the locusts swooped in with a loud, continuous buzzing and attacked the ants, who huddled together, surrounding the injured, the old, eggs, larvae and the queen.

There were many more ants than locusts, but locusts can fly, they have killer jaws and their appetite is nearly insatiable. By day’s end, they’d decimated the colony, whose hardiest members burrowed deep underground, saving the queen.

“Suckers,” laughed the locust king, devouring the last of his feast. “Losers.”

Then the locusts, fat and happy, flew away to find new prey in another forest.

But not for long because the average lifespan of a locust is only four months. Ants, by contrast, can live for years, their queens for decades.

Soon the locusts, too weak to attack, their selfish lives ebbing away, began to fall dead to the forest floor, where detritivores consumed their carcasses.

All the while, the ants carried on, forming columns, marching, gathering supplies, fortifying their home, raising new generations of ants and protecting the colony, where values and wisdom reside and abide.
Sivan Pillai
13/6/2025 10:24:56 am

The weak, like ants, will continue to fight the strong, protecting their colonies where 'values and wisdom reside and abide', Don.

Peppermint
13/6/2025 01:06:23 pm

Absolute genius wrapped in scientific truth. I can hear the cicadas singing as I read. Well done, Don. You make us think.

Kathy K
13/6/2025 02:40:52 pm

All of nature lives in cycles. If we stand back far enough, we can see that humans seem to follow the same cycles as the rest of life on this planet.

Cheryl Dahlstrand
13/6/2025 02:52:54 pm

Beautifully constructed analogy, Don.

Libby Belle link
13/6/2025 02:54:31 pm

Powerful! Great story! Write on, Don!

Don Tassone link
14/6/2025 01:57:55 pm

Thank you all for your comments on this metaphorical story.

Rao Rehan
5/7/2025 08:52:36 am

Locusts remind me of Bibi and IDF. Great allegorical story.

Don Tassone link
5/7/2025 12:45:48 pm

Thank you, Rao.


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