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Thunder and Lightning, by Angela Carlton

7/1/2022

 
Sometimes, her mind chases the sound of the fat thunder in the night. Her heart is wobbly because her mother’s sick. The mother paces the floor, mumbles-mumbles-mumbles. She runs out in the street, yelling in her scraggly nightgown, frosted hair, and chapped lips with a fierce mind that cannot be contained. That’s when the child sees the lightning outside the window and it reminds her of the fairies, the beautiful ones she’s seen in books, the ones that brighten and paint the sky. It feels like joy.

But fairies have magic, don’t they? She closes her eyes and wishes for it, a perfect one with flowy, golden hair, a pleasant smile. She wished and wished and wished for anything, something more.

The years passed, it seemed, well, the girl was under a deep, dreamlike spell until words, the words began to shake her, and the language fell everywhere, all around her like snow.

And this, yes, this was the beginning, the very beginning of a story, her path to freedom.
Jim B link
7/1/2022 08:58:20 pm

Nice picture you've painted with your descriptions here, and a heartbreaking story within. But there's more to this story, and inquiring minds want to know!
Nice
Jim

Angela Carlton link
7/1/2022 09:09:20 pm

Thank you, Jim. I'm fascinated with mystical tales and characters who thrive and or RISE!

Natalie
7/1/2022 09:51:46 pm

Oh what a beautiful beginning for this girl…rich with wonder and words! I love the way the language fell everywhere around her like snow…so majestic. Nice imagery :-)

Megan
7/1/2022 10:25:47 pm

Amazing. I can see this turned into a novel, a book or a three act play. Thank you for sharing your art and gift.

Ashley Smallwood
8/1/2022 02:44:04 am

Very nice and magical. Takes you away to a place of happiness.

Sue Clayton
8/1/2022 02:53:33 am

You are that little girl, Angela, with your wondrous words.

Brook
9/1/2022 01:31:45 pm

The path to freedom is long and hard. It can be drawling or painting or painting with words. I’m glad you found your path and I’m glad you have so much talent. Love seeing the stops along the way as you go down the path.


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