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Too Late, by Don Tassone

20/6/2025

 
She looked across the room at her husband, sprawled across the sofa, dozing off as he watched TV.

For a moment, she tried to think of him as he was when he was a young man. When he was handsome and fit, when he was confident and ambitious, when he was fun and energetic.

She had loved him then, madly. When they were together, she was euphoric. When they were apart, she ached for him.

Over time, though, he changed. His drive waned, and his looks faded. He retired and traded his suits for sweats. He stopped shaving. He seldom left home. He was quiet and always seemed a little sad.

To his wife, he had become a colossal disappointment. He bore little resemblance to the man she had married. She could hardly look at him anymore. She barely spoke to him.

Still, he loved her. Once he brought her flowers. The next day, he found them in the trash. He didn’t bring her flowers again.

One morning, when he didn’t come downstairs, she called up to him. When he didn’t answer, she went up to his room. He was in bed, under the covers.

“Wake up, you bum!” she yelled from the doorway.

But he didn’t move.

Now she lives alone. She wishes she had asked her husband how he was doing. She wishes she had kept those flowers.
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Sivan Pillai
20/6/2025 11:33:42 am

She should not have expected her husband to be the same after several years. Nice story, Don.

Sivan Pillai
20/6/2025 11:36:48 am

She should not have expected her husband to be the same man after several years. Nice story, Don

Kathy K.
20/6/2025 03:04:19 pm

Shallow people will always wake up too late. To accept someone’s love only for what you get out of it is what I mean by shallow. To stop loving someone when the looks are gone is shallow. Thank you, Don, for a good story.

Kathy K
20/6/2025 03:14:39 pm

P.S. I also like that story because it reminds me of pictures of couples who have been married since they were 18 and continued to be married until they were 105 and they were devoted to each other very much every minute of the time.

Cheryl Dahlstrand
20/6/2025 04:22:05 pm

Interesting to contemplate- what caused the wife's regret?
It appears that her regret only, sadly, concerned herself.

Krystyna
20/6/2025 04:47:39 pm

How often we humans regret after it’s too late to reverse?
Sad but so true your story, Don.

Don Tassone link
21/6/2025 02:19:24 am

Thank you all for your thoughtful comments.

Sue Clayton
23/6/2025 04:02:27 am

You have to wonder just how much she changed after all those years.

Don Tassone link
23/6/2025 11:20:01 am

Indeed. Thanks, Sue.

Tom Baldwin
24/6/2025 12:12:25 pm

A sad story of diverging lives which, I suspect, is more common than we realise.

Don Tassone link
24/6/2025 12:27:56 pm

All too common. Thanks, Tom.

Jim Bartlett link
29/6/2025 03:44:29 pm

Like a ship fading into the horizon, we can and too often do lose sight of that spark that once was the brightest of lights in our lives.
And when it's gone all we have left is regret.
Nicely done, Don
Jim

Don Tassone link
29/6/2025 04:26:23 pm

Well said, Jim. Thank you.


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