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Unsportsmanlike Conduct, by Alyce Clark

1/4/2022

 
I look up at the fans, arm held high, acknowledging both Super Bowl teams and head for the field.

Who would have thought the scrawny, little kid the neighborhood bullies picked on would be an official ref in the NFL?

Certainly not the big kids targeting me at school and on the playground.

I remember it like it was yesterday. John Richards (the leader), constantly teasing, threatening, yelling.

“Don’t be such a loser,” he’d say with each passing shove.

And now I stand officiating in the big game. The youngest ref in NFL history. Just as excited as the players.

Opposing coaches nod at one another- preparing for battle. Teams in position. My whistle at the ready.

The players don’t disappoint. It’s a constant back and forth. Touch downs made. Field goals solid. Crowd’s ecstatic.

An unexpected fumble leads to an interception towards the end of the fourth quarter. The crowd on its feet, the would-be hero racing down the field. It all comes down to this.

Defense closing in, he stumbles near the end zone. A collective gasp. Is it a touch down? Or is he out of bounds?

A hush falls over the stadium as they wait for the call.

NFL darling, number 37, John Richards, stands and looks me dead in the eyes. Recognition. I can see his heart sinking- and I smile.
Sue Clayton
2/4/2022 02:02:21 am

Karma time. I hope he was a nice ref and made the right call.

Martha J
2/4/2022 05:46:20 am

This story really makes the mind wander and wonder. The referee's call for this play could determine a victory or loss, based on his personal feelings toward one particular player in the game.

Don Tassone link
2/4/2022 01:03:31 pm

Sweet. 😎

Jim Bartlett link
2/4/2022 03:41:05 pm

Nicely done, Alyce
Jim

Cassie
3/4/2022 03:48:18 am

You know how to develop food for thought.Drama!!! Would he take this opportunity for revenge?

Shirley
3/4/2022 01:10:41 pm

This is his chance to show who the bigger man is. Will he make the right call? Well done Alyce, you leave us in suspense!!

Fliss Zakaszewska
3/4/2022 05:50:20 pm

As Dpn said, sweet.

Alyce Clark
5/4/2022 03:24:31 am

Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts.

Robert Bishop
8/4/2022 09:48:54 pm

Alyce...
Revenge by any other name....recognition, heart sinking, I smile...is still revenge. Oh yeah...Cool story. Liked it.
Robert

Alyce Clark
9/4/2022 10:53:47 pm

Thanks for your comment, Robert. Glad you enjoyed it!


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